Chapter 23: Tao's such an . Sure, he may have been selfish before this, but I completely understand the need to heal from such deep betrayal. Even if he had lied to himself and others, it made sense. But with Taemin? Who cares if he's the baby? Did Tao even stop to think of exactly what would have happened to his OWN family if Illume's plan had worked? Did Taemin not actively participate in those plans? Does the whole pack mentality thing somehow excuse him from the atrocities he's committed? Were they supposed to just let him go (possibly to return later to avenge his 'brothers'), or let such a disgusting wolf join their pack? Youth is no excuse for horridness. We all need to take responsibility for our actions, and in my opinion, Taemin got exactly what he deserved. Tao has a right to be angry at Kris for lying to him & turning him. He has NO right to be angry at Luhan & Kai. They gave the little piece of a fast death instead of torturing him, or selling him off to those with special needs. Exotica truly needs to set Tao straight & let him know that just because he's suffering from Stockholm syndrome or something of the sort, doesn't make him right.
Chapter 25: Oh lord this fanfic is so great. The plot and the drama T.T I cried. The end was unexpected and the bonus last chapter which was a flashback from Kris' POV made me so emotional.
Chapter 25: Oh god I need a chapter from Key's perspective when he finally notices that he underestimated Suho. I love that Suho is stronger than Kris here, even though he is an omega. That made me incredibly happy :) it's a great story and I'm really looking forward to reading the sequel. Thank you for your hard work dear author :)
Chapter 24: wait so im a little confused, is this before or after the big fight? because in my opinion everything says its before, but the info also leads that something could have happened to tao and that kris has once again lost him.... please explain?
also, this is the second time in all my life of reading fanfiction that i have ever cried.... ;-; oh god, im tearing up just typing this!!!
Chapter 4: Now that I'm finally rereading after half a year, I'm spotting my biggest issue with this story.
All the wrong ships! Sudo? Selay? Kailu? What the Hell was I doing reading this...oh. I know. Aside from that, this story is pure genius. Great job author-nim. You make people like stories that they would otherwise skip.
Chapter 7: Oh my god what was this I'm very conflicted Yixing kinda treats Sehun like a friend's younger brother? And not like a potential mate? And Sehun's personality?? What? Anyways this chapter was really adorable kekekeke
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