Toronto is damn cold in winter I went there and my tears turned to ice I kid you not
but yiiiiisssss canada (OvO)
I have a glass of water beside me in case I choke on laughter I'm so ready for this fic
Chapter 3: ITS CHAPTER THREE AND IM TING MYSLEF GDI WHAT IS THIS UNEXCUSED CREATION BY THE MAN OF GOD THIS IS HELL
NOT SURE I CAN MAKE IT TILL THE END IF I KEEP LOSIN% MY EACH CHAPTER
R U SURE THIS HAS GOT ANYTHING TO DO WITH ROMANCE BCS
Chapter 22: Holy this is pure gold!!! Nah seriously I'm not even kidding, this is awesome . I love everything, literally ever single thing, in this fanfic. While the plot itself wasn't all dramatic and complicated, I think the fact that it is so simple and relatable made it more enjoyable to read. I found it very amusing that I could associate myself being in their situations, starting from Jongin's insecurity when going to college for the first time (not to mention the fact that he didn't get into his first choice, which actually happened to me too), the hardships of being in uni (like the assignments and all that ), the party life (and how to tone it down after things went wrong ie self control lol), the fun atmosphere of being in a college club (and a bit of drama involved in that too) and the 'twinkie' jokes! Omg it cracked me up! Haven't heard that for a long time and it really got me :)))
All the jokes, the nature of the conversations and arguments (interpersonal intrapersonal, spiked lmao) everything seemed natural and I can't help but finding myself falling into your story. I feel like, the way you present them is so down-to-earth... Like, they're just the boys next door BUT THEY'RE FREAKING AWESOME. How I wish to have them in uni so that I could fangirl in real life :)) or prolly not. I love how you incorporated the literature references into your story; from Baek's movies list to Sehun's random question (the Socs! Omg can you not :)) Ahh this is so adorable, I don't even want it to end. I also love the way you describe Toronto, it sounds like a really nice city. I had to google where High Park was, and the Ryerson Uni as well, and Eaton Centre too. Tbh, it was never on my list (although my good friend goes to UofT as well and she's always begging me to go visit her) but your story bought me... Seriously, this is so awesome. I'm glad I read this. Thanks xx
claps claps claps this is AMAZING, author-nim! your use of language is really fun and easy to read, the humor isn't dry at all, your portrayal of the characters and their distinct personalities are great! plot moves really smoothly & without any apparent plot holes whatsoever (aside of their lack of activities as a group but hey, it's a romance fic after all xD), you include side characters' romance as well, and idk man, this is soooo great! i'm so glad this is one of the first fanfictions i've stumbled upon on this site.
anyhow thank you very much for the fun fanfic, author-nim! enjoyed every moment and left with this emptiness after reading the final chapter. it would be really great if you could post another fanfic... i could use more of some BL flufiness heheh cheers!!
Chapter 22: Mygoodness! I can't thank you enough for writing this perfectly amd sharing it! Thank you so much! I pretty much laughed my off while squealing while readin this. Youre the best Author-nim!
Chapter 21: This is f-ing beautiful. Legit. And I actually REALLY dislike canon ships, so saying that I read ALL this...in two days...you're a pretty genius genius. Even though I only really read Lay fics, this one literally caught my attention THE moment I finished the foreword. I wasn't even SAD that Yixing only appeared a handful of times. Just..................it is AWEsome. I might cry at this.
Chapter 22: One of the funniest story I've ever read.. Thank you authornim! I love their hilarious and playful personality.. I'll miss this fic.. And yes I'll read it again sometime. :)
Chapter 22: Oh god, why does it have to end DDD:
I am so in love with this story and TVE personality of each characters. Hope you continúe writing about them :B
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