Chapter 4: Wow badass Dara when she saved Kevin again. Haha nice introduction with Kevin the second time. And oh, when she said that she was Kevin's girlfriend is sooo cute!
Chapter 2: Waah I laughed at the guy calling Dara a nerdy e hehe. I wish Kevin was also a vampire. Like he had been compelled before by the council of elder vampires since he was out of control and mercilessly killed almost all the people in the city. You know, he could be evil vampire for a long time who greeds for power until he was casted a spell to forget who he was with the help of a girl he fell in love with. And now in present time, he seeka redemption once he found out who he really was.
Chapter 2: Correct me if I'm wrong but I noticed that the butterfly above looks like there's eyes on it's wings and it made me think like it was Dara's half mask when she goes to the concert.
I'm new to this story and I hope this is a DaraVin fanfic. I like also the dark theme with full of mysteries. It makes me curious and continue reading.
Chapter 25: Omona o_O I like your story very much [ to be honest,i love all the stories about vampires; I don't know why this mythic creatures fascinates me <3 ] I can't wait to read the next chapter *clap my hands*
But what happened with her blood source? How he disappeared ? o_O Strange! Anyways,you do a great job with this story :P Fighting! [And yes,I'm your new subscriber, hihihi ;) ]
Chapter 13: Man Dara is so powerful! Lol I love it! I'm really thinking that Kevin was the one who killed Dara's parents. But that's just my theory lol. Nader who the new character can be mhmmm xD is Dara's awaken going to have a name? Hahaha. Anyways great update! Can't wait to read the next chapter.
Chapter 11: So he only becomes a full vampire in the rain. Hahaha nice twist. What if the Vampire that killed Dara's parents was Kevin since it was raining that time. My theory is that Kevin's awaken took over him, but Dara's mom or someone was able to help him seal it off. Or maybe I'm just crazy lol. Great update!
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