Chapter 1: asdjkjmkjoijkl!!! i'm speechless ;AA; my krisho feels T___T i cant wait for your another krisho fic sobs..thanks for making a great story like this ><
Chapter 1: I WAS JUST SIMPLY CRYING READING THIS! This was beautiful, really, really beautiful.. this was great, thanks for sharing this fic with us, Author-nim!
your writing is simple yet it's truly beautiful and the plot is somehow cliche but it makes people feel drawn to it, its like, it makes you want to read it over and over again. that kind of feeling.
this story truly deserves more views. actually, you deserves much more.
also, i'm kind of sorry(not really) for stalking(?) your profile and stories.i understand if you're freaked out. i would be too
lol, i'm not even sure if you're going to read this
as a side note, OMG!! it's krisho!!! it's kind of hard to find a good quality krisho fics here in AFF, also i haven't seen much krisho fics in livejournal lately
uh i rarely cry because of story and just good story can make me crying...
And guess what?
Yours is the ONE...
maybe the plot is too usual but look how you write this!!! Veryyy good (y)
I don't just crying, but sobbing too T.T cuz i like so-called 'family drama'
And Joonmyun.. i feel pity for him... and Jong In..
wow fantastic baby/dance/
I really really want a sequel please*puppy eyes :'(
But yeah that's not my right. So why would I?
But i hope so :D
And then i can read your beautiful story :3
Fighting author-nim!!!
Seems my comment like a drabble fic :/
Just forget this crazy person and keep writing :*
Chapter 1: I CANNOT
I REALLY CANNOT
/chokes and flails
YOU'RE ONE OF THE BEST KRISHO WRITERS OUT THERE OKAY I SWEAR
THIS WAS WONDERFUL <33333333333
it was so sad though; how you portrayed joonmyun as the one that had nothing and jongin as the brother who had everything. it broke my heart ; - ; </3
and his parents I AM SO NOT HAPPY WITH THEM /flips tables/ they are such horrible parents i can't even - . - no parent should ever be like this, i swear GAH
AND KRIS YOU BEAUTIFUL PERSON I WANT TO KILL YOU AND LOVE YOU HOW IS THAT EVEN POSSIBLE HURHUR /sobs/ HE'S the one who's an angel, in my opinion. he's so sweet and loving to joonmyun and omg their sweet angsty interactions always get me ; u ; <3
AND JONGIN LOVE YOU TOOOOO never expected him to be the kind of person who truly cared tbh because of how his parents treat him and even 'protecting' his brother from all those potential pursuers AHAHHAHAH but YES YOU ARE A GOOD PERSON JONGIN LOVE YOU AND YOUR BOYFRIEND \O/ /slapped
AND THE ENDING. I WOULD JUST LIKE TO SAY: "IN YOUR FACES PARENTS 8DDDD" /shot
Chapter 1: ASJDNAKSJNDA NO THIS IS TOO BEAUTIFUL D':
i especially liked it when kyungsoo was telling joonmyun about how jongin has always looked up to him from the start :')
thank u for writing this!!
Chapter 1: You know I love every story you write, right?
You know that I love you right?
Goodness... what are you doing to me... this fic is soooo good and I'm asking for more... >.<
Chapter 1: You are my favourite author-nim. Joonmyeon is so adorable in this!! I just wanted to hug him the whole time. I'm glad that Jongin ended up being on his side. I'm such a fan of KrishHo!!! Thanks!!
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