Chapter 13: WOW!!Just WOW!! I never saw Sehun and Jongin's scene coming. I still can't believe it! whew!! It's 3:25 am here in Phil. and I'm stuck reading this fic. I just love it! JJANG!
Chapter 11: Wuahh im indonesian tbh.. And my english is mediocre huhuhu
But i still tried to read this fanfic:") cause the translator from indo maybe busy no.. She not updet for long time huhu and finally i risk to read the original on aff hahaha
Chapter 13: I've been reading this story in one go, and couldn't get my self to stop even for comment, but now I just gota say this is hella of good story, I wonder why I haven't found it before??
And omg when sehun said he loved jongin I rememberd l.will song>< such a heart breaking T.T is it me or kris gonna do something bad?? Well I think I should read it to know although it's past 2am in here....... Man I need to sleep....
Chapter 20: How can a kid write something like this? hahaha. Don't think so.
Anyways, good story and I don't ger why she's angry with him. I kinda understand, but still... Yeah, good story.
Chapter 23: The story development is fine; I read till the end in one go. Sehun was a surprise for sure. Wu Fan's role is a mystery; seems like he's supposed to be "disguised" like a bad guy but isn't actually. I mean he was Haeun's lover and he\s willing to pay for the surgery to "recover" Jongin via grafting and maybe plastic surgery. Maybe you originally had another role for Yi Fan in mind in the beginning because Taehee was really antagonizing him. Jongin's character is fine; he's not really that much of a "bad" boy like he was made out in the beginning; he was a pretty considerate person. I'm just disappointed with the main character, Taehee. Her character is completely unpredictable. She's supposed to try to give her child a future that she never had so I would've thought she would put Jongmin before anything else...but she kinda put Jongin as priority at times. Also, she's not very mindful of the people around her at all...is that why she's called the Devil? How she's a devil or a maneater is not developed very well within the story; I just don't get that feeling...and the devil part I didn't get that until the end when she made the Beijing trip; her words were rather cruel and distrustful for someone who found out a loved one that was "dead" was actually alive. All I see in her is a weak girl trying to be strong, who's also stubborn over her own beliefs, sometimes at the cost of the people around her. Actually the one thing I struggled with in the beginning was why Taehee even loved Jongin at all in the first place. If they were "rivals", they must have had strong feelings of dislike between them. I don't know where the turning point where she started to love him. Like if she didn't give a "" about him, why bother making the Beijing trip and leaving her son behind. She could've just sent him a letter and express her anger with that. I guess out of all the characters, she is the one I just can't understand because of her unpredictability.
Chapter 1: Hey, came from Mind Sync and trying to complete the piece of this puzzle. Author -nim really make me can't stop reading this series.. Author -nim jjang!! Great work! Hehe, I really love the way you express in your story❤
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