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Hani_ah #1
Thank you so much for the review!!! I'll work hard to improve!
unnielove #2
*cont: <br />
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Images: I'd like for this image to be in the middle (http://en.korea.com/snsd/board/college-students-want-snsd/) and then solo pictures of the boys surrounding them:<br />
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leeteuk http://sup3rjunior.com/2010/05/02/leeteuk-in-a-photoshoot-teacher/leeteuk-5-3/<br />
jonghyun http://www.fanpop.com/spots/shinee/images/3000759/title/taemin-jonghyun-photo (cut Taemin out if possible xD)<br />
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siwon: http://immortalsoul123.files.wordpress.com/2010/02/siwon.jpg<br />
eunhyuk: http://lastrimeiwinarni.wordpress.com/2011/05/18/super-junior-eun-hyuk-profile/ (bottom picture)<br />
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minho: http://seoulawesome.wordpress.com/2011/02/09/korean-fashion-for-men-korean-school-uniform-style/ (picture with just minho in it)<br />
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changmin: http://luckycat88.blogspot.com/2008_12_01_archive.html (solo picture in the middle of the page)<br />
donghae: http://13boys.wordpress.com/2010/02/07/donghae-semir-promotional-card-pic/ or http://s721.photobucket.com/albums/ww211/acelshangel/cRushZx q/?action=view¤t=360462674_3b1c27e78c.jpg&mediafilter=images<br />
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kyuhyun: http://aethernumvale.wordpress.com/2010/09/02/100901kh-kyuhyun-number-1-‘singer-best-matched-in-a-school-uniform’/ or http://afspot.net/gallery/index.php?act=image&pid=352064&page=193<br />
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it would be great if the poster could be made soon, but i understand that you guys are busy so i'll wait <3 ^^
unnielove #3
Title: Nine Angels In the Alleyway<br />
Author: Cee-Cee (unnielove)<br />
Link to story: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/46683/nine-angels-in-the-alleyway-changsoo-minyul-seokyu-sifany-sunsun-taeteuk-yoonhae<;br />
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Theme of poster: happy, but also with some sadness (theres angst in this story) *high school themed*<br />
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Characters: So Nyuh Shi Dae, Leeteuk, Jonghyun, Sungmin, Siwon, Eunhyuk, Minho, Changmin, Donghae, Kyuhyun<br />
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Character appearance: Sungmin in a school uniform (mianhe, i couldn't find any good ones T_T)<br />
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Quotes (optional): With or without wings, these angels still fly towards their dreams.
kidamazone #4
Thank you so much for your review! I love the fact that you added so many other ways to improve my story~. I will keep the tips in mind when writing my next chapters~ And I'll put up the link to this review in my next chapter.<br />
Thank you again! <3
dayuum_
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Title: Secret Admirers; On a Mission<br />
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Link to story: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/12860/secret-admirers-on-a-mission-apply-christmas-dalmatian-korean-kpop<;br />
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Author: qwuin-tastic<br />
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Brief description of story: <br />
Mr. Jang, the principle of Osan High School has announced that there will be a special event for the upcoming season; CHRISTMAS! All the students, and I mean everyone, is required to pick a name by lunch. <br />
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Whoever it is, they must buy gifts until the Winter Dance but they must not reveal themselves to that person. The event will be held for 5 days. On the day of the Winter Dance, they will finally reveal who they are to that person. <br />
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Who knows what might happen during this event is taking place. People might fall in love with their secret santa, or even ... slap them?<br />
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Genre: romance comedy<br />
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Extra Information: none :)
dayuum_
#6
i can't seem to request from you :|
MelodyTOP #7
No actually I like it the way it is thank you >.<
anniekhun #8
Title: Deuces Review Shop<br />
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Author: anniekhun<br />
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Link to story: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/44270/deuces-review-shop-review<;br />
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Theme of poster: cute, pretty, bright<br />
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Characters: Ukiss, Beast...any group really :)<br />
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Character apperance (eg. ulzzang etc.): ulzzang, happy..?<br />
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Extra information: It's a review shop so have fun with it:) GO JASMINE GO GO GO!<br />
Hani_ah #9
Title- Excuse Me<br />
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Link to story - http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/43520/excuse-me-amber-cnu-seohyun-yonghwa<;br />
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Author - Hani_ah<br />
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Brief description of story - Hayley's a singer who's group, The Stunners just broke up. Deciding she needs a break from LA, but then changing her mind, she's glad that her bestfriend comes back home to visit. After a heartbreak and much convincing from her friend, she decides to go to korea for music school. There she meets the energetic and cute, CNU, the quiet know-it-all, Yonghwa, and the sneaky Seohyun. Eventually she starts to feel for Yonghwa.<br />
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Genre - romance, comedy, music<br />
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Extra info - none
dayuum_
#10
does my fanfic have to be completed for you to review it? ;/
SSZE_A501 #11
Thanks xforeva again for the review!<br />
nice to hear that i am improving!<br />
Thank you!
crystalline_sunshine
#12
Title: Heart's Connection<br />
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Link to story: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/40286<;br />
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Author: crystalline_sunshine<br />
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Brief description of story: An idol and an average girl finds themselves spellbound a day after they kissed. Because of this, they have to spend an awful amount of time together. Just as the girl was falling for Hyunseung, her ex-boyfriend returns which causes her to be unsure of whom she really loves.<br />
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Genre: Romance, Comedy<br />
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Extra Information: English isn't my first language since I'm Filipino! :D<br />
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Thank You~!
angelastyles
#13
<b>Title:</b> So... I'm His Boyfriend?<br />
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<b>Link to story:</b> http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/26180/<;br />
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<b>Author:</b> b2utyfulshawol<br />
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<b>Brief description of story:</b> Kim Kibum, the ever so eccentric rapper/singer/dancer of South Korea's famous contemporary boyband, SHINee, is the boyfriend of average pretentious girl, Park Hae Young. Seems like the perfect Cinderella story, right? Not exactly, especially if you consider the fact that your boyfriend ends up being the princess, and, well, you end up being the prince. This just makes you wonder... who really wears the pants in this relationship?<br />
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<b>Genre:</b> Comedy, Romance<br />
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<b>Extra Information:</b> Thank you so much for doing this! I'd just really like to know if my story seems to be enjoyable enough ^^
MelodyTOP #14
also decided you like different images that is fine too :)
MelodyTOP #15
Title: To Catch A Star<br />
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Author:MelodyTOP<br />
Link to story: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/37868/to-catch-a-star-kpop<;br />
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Theme of poster: (eg. dark, vampire, cute etc.) This is so that we can know what colour scheme to use. Once again, be as specific as you possibly can<br />
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Characters: Bigbang, JYJ, MBLAQ<br />
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Quotes (optional): Love is for the weak minded<br />
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Images: http://1.bp.blogspot.com/_r4Nqrk7yrNE/TSuUPVaYLsI/AAAAAAAABSM/evWfNX--a_U/s1600/jyj+9.jpg<br />
http://static.desktopnexus.com/thumbnails/257219-bigthumbnail.jpg<br />
http://www.asianbite.com/photos/mblaq_22191.jpg<br />
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MissIns
#16
Title: Your Juliette Coming!!!<br />
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Link to story: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/22793/your-juliette-coming-shinee<;br />
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Author: their_shawol<br />
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Brief description of story: Juliette is a new Kpop girl group, there's an incident that make them close with the shining boy group that is SHINee. At start, they maybe hate each other, but at the end.... All of we don't know what will happen, right?<br />
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Genre: Romance and comedy<br />
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Extra information: please make a blingbling background that look cheerful.<br />
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Images:<br />
Can you help me find the images, because i donno very well about it ^^.<br />
The images I want in the poster is, <br />
-SHINee<br />
-Park Gyuri(KARA)<br />
-Lizzy(After school)<br />
-Victoria(fx)<br />
-Tiffany(Girs generation)<br />
-Sulli(fx)<br />
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I hope you can help me do the poster, if you have some problems with my poster, just post at my wall. Thank you :)
SSZE_A501 #17
thankyou xforevax for doing the review.<br />
No, i'm not upset or pissed off I like <br />
getting honest reviews so I can improve!<br />
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Thank you.
mmysterianna #18
Title: I found Lee Junho in a Box<br />
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Link to story: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/30572/i-found-lee-junho-in-a-box-2pm-comedy-crackfic-junho-romance-sunye<;br />
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Author: mmysterianna<br />
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Brief description of story: What happens if an idol is found in a box? Especially on from the male idol group of 2PM with a mother like Park Jaebeom? Hilarity ensues and the events are documented in this story.<br />
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Genre: Romance, Comedy<br />
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Extra Information: I rarely receive comments based on grammar and vocabulary used. I would like specific comments on vocabulary used. Thanks you <3