Chapter 4: I just hope that ajjusi will help them overcome it..gulp

Chapter 3: oh i think i now kim cheonsa,,she's one of my friend in the AFF..ooh she's so lucky she got to be kris's girlfriend..i'm proud of you my friend
i think this is a mix of final destination and another horror-thriller movie but i forget the title
anyway,it's interesting :)

Reminds me of Final Destination.. /shudders

NUUUUU JOONMYUNNIE ;___;

lol bini Dato' LCW buat cameo di sini? Haha jk jk XD

Update soon, hwaiting :D

Chapter 3: It's begin...

Chapter 3: Omona.... The angel suho died.... This also proves not to text or talk to strangers >.< I luv the story plot~ Keep it up and update soon~~ Hwaiting!

Chapter 3: Nooo sweet Suho died I'm going to find that girl lol

Chapter 3: Who the heck is the girl ? It was thrilling actually ;) keel updating author-nim

Chapter 3: Suho :'c
nooooooooooooooooooo
andueyooooo
nooooooooooo
sob sob sob
i guess the ahjushi bad aura was damnnn right!
goshhhh!
ahjushi!!!
who's next??
save them!!!!!!!!
:'C

Chapter 3: (+)update soon,authornim.i adore this story v.muchiess

Chapter 3: i love suhooooo! no. he should not die! btw,kris is my lover!how can my life be more interesting?XDhehehehe

Chapter 3: why suho must dead?andwaeyooo!by the way,i love kris and cheonsa partXD very romantic.and what?i am cheonsa!!superb!

Chapter 3: bull____t.he's dead!:Onooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!

Chapter 3: Jesus!!!
Oh crap!!!!!!
why?why?why????
why my suho!
OH NO!
The old man 'aura' was true!!!!
nooooo!!!

Chapter 3: what thee~~~ why suho's dead???

WHYY?????????????

god. at the entrance of this fic, u already make a person dead. u are so evil..


and, there's one mistake i would like to pick out.


when u were exclaiming 'Suho's dead! Suho was dead!'
there's a grammar mistake there.
-Suho's dead (present tense)
-Suho was dead (past tense)

choose either one sis! :D

glad u manage to update in time before i sleep :D

Chapter 1: Is Final Destination your inspiration for this fic? It's cool though :)

Chapter 1: Omo. Maybe he can predict the future ._. New reader here !! *waves*

Chapter 2: who's that ahjussi????
gooooshhhhh!
anyway,
keep updating