WHAT DID YOU SAY JONGIN WHAT WAS THAT PFFFFT IM SO GLAD JIYEON PUNCHED U JUST SO YOU KNOW
I LOVE IT SO MUCH FAVORITE TAEKAI EVURRR
hold on there tae. hold on just a lil bit bb
now can I pinpoint some (all) of the chap part because u said i can:
-> Taemin watched with grief, the pole
getting smaller and smaller in his sight. // taemin you...you.
-> Taemin whipped around, and to his surprise, it was Jongin who Jiyeon was locking eyes with. // DIES . I gripped PCdesk so hard my fingers hurt- jongin maybe one of the reason u never dated bcz u creep, man.
-> “Who told you that it was one-sided?” Pocketing his hand into his uniform jacket, Jongin took a step forward. “Lee Taemin?” // wow jongin why try to sound so smart no body bother i think its rather the exact opposite
-> “If it's one-sided,” Jongin was saying,
“why do you think I'm here right
now?” // Id pass out if i were taemin just saying. CAN YOU BE ANYMORE BLUNT KIM. my stomach tickles ;_;
-> Jongin nodded slowly. He pulled
Taemin by the sleeve, hastily letting
go when their fingers touched. // young love :') so embarassing :') I clawed at my desk now theres the print of my sharp nails on it. lol ILUSM AUTHORNIM
-> “I had to, since all you seem to do
these days is avoid me.” Jongin said,
his face flushing red. “It’s really
frustrating you know," // SEE WHOS BLUSHING IN THE END HAHAHAHA I WISH I WAS THERE ID TEASE JONGIN LIKE BAEK TO KYUNGSOO I SWEAR this is my fav part
-> Massaging her arm, Jiyeon
casually shook her used hand. // SHES SO QUOOOLLL OMG HERO OF THE DAY
I love jealous!Jongin I live for it ok
NO ITS NOT ENDING ITS NOT /sobs/ its not ...
Ill miss it so much when it does :(
i think it shud b mentioned that the reason i made aff acc bcz i wanna comment on this story of urs. so when its done... my purpose here is...done...
made my day rly and early update too thank u sm authornim :D
Chapter 34: OH MY GOD THIS STORRRYYYYYY!!! I just fangirling so hard when Jongin showed up and GAAAAHHH, when he stared at Jiyeon I feel like he said 'Taemin's mine' or something.
And 'If it's one-sided...' I wonder why Taemin not questioning Jongin's words??? And Jongin even stalked Taemin and Chanyeol I love love love Jongin in this story, his words and actions seemed doesn't match sometimes and I like it!
LOL at Taemin's thought of taekwondo -__-" Anyway I like this chapter, great update!
Agh I can't tell you how much I love this story! So much drama and I never know what's gonna happen next! ugh I just.... LOVE it so much! Please update soon! ♥♥♥
Chapter 33: hi it's been so long since i've commented i'm so sorry :(
i think that what truly missed in the comments you got was "AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH THE TAEMSTAL MY GOOODDDDDDDDD" because seriously you got me shipping them more and more.... do you watch korean dramas? i usually don't but i started "the heirs" because of krystal in it and OH MY GOD SERIOUSLY IT'S EXACTLY HOW SOOJUNG IS IN YOUR STORY wowowowowowowowowwwww i was mind blown i was like "thank the dear lord they reincarnated my favourite character from my favourite story"
i wanted to say Soojung's love for Taemin in your story is the cutest because really she's the best but then you wrote the part where Taemin reads Jongin's texts and DANG I CRY because their relationship is so perfect and Jongin is so caring and they need each other because they complete each other and it's so beautiful
also Sulli is a gem you're such a genius and the chapters where the five characters appear are my favourites (this and ch24 of courseeee) i'm soooo excited for new year's eve
and there always are little details that make your story stand out so much like "let's go. i mean, let's go see the sunrise" how do you do it seriously...
my love for you and this story seems unending
i love soojung because she's intelligent and witty. she always knew Jongin wasn't sincere about her and she's only mentioning it now because it's the right time to. "that self-destruction thing. it doesn't sound so bad" THOSE ARE AN ANGEL'S WORDS
Chapter 33: I FEEL THE END NOOOOOOOOO. Hope that it will continue for a long time!
And can you explain why Jonjin quit his club in the next chapter? I have waited for it. Thank you again and again <3
Chapter 33: Jeeeeeeeez, I love your updates ♥
A LOT, THEY´RE SO FUNNY!!
Love the whole plot, really. Nice work.
TAEMIN FOR GOD´S SAKE JUST SAY THE INF TRUTH, JEEZ.
Please update soon again, I´m so in love with your writing style ♥
Chapter 33: WOW, It had been a log time, miss your update TT^TT
I'm laughed so hard bout 'ChanChan' coz that's really my nickname for Chanyeol (beside 'nyeolie') when I talked bout EXO with my friends,what a coincide, LOL
Ah, Soojung already give up TT^TT, well, that's okay, TaeKai ftw, LOL
And, Jongin's so calm O.O, I can smells TaeKai in the next chap, hmmm, kekeke and you didn't have to defend Jongin coz he's really frustating, LOL, But, I like him right now, he's so cool~
it's not important but I LOVE TAE PICT IN THE END, >///< HE'S FABULOUS AS ALWAYS
Chapter 33: Soojung already let Taemin go (I think?), and it seems Chanyeol's time to let go will come soon... Arrgh can't wait for the next chapter and their interaction, OT5 sobs ;____; I demand more Taekai! Taekai! Taekai for lifeeee!
*torn between want to read the end for them but don't want this story to end*
Chapter 33: Lool sulli's so weird, stap sulli stap (but don't stop)
PARK CHANYEOL YOUUUUUUUUUUU- *dies*
why is he so ♨
...and.. i wonder if taemin will ever go see jiyeon LOL
This fic deserves more views :-)
Here have a happy d.o ＼(⊙♡⊙)/♪♬
Chapter 33: Srly when I read your fic I feel like I'm watching a kdrama <3 Your chapters are so great I never get enough of them <3 This was flawless. Tae is different now with Chanyeol and Krystal. He shows his care. And I love this extremely much. And JongIn wants to go to see the sunriseeeee!!! All of them together <3 Can't wait for the next update <3
PS. The photo with Tae...OMG Drooling TT_TT My bias <3
Chapter 33: This sunrise thingy won't end well if they're all I'm the same place xD
I just hope Chanyeol will be close to Taemin and Jongin will get jealous ;)
But first I wanna know how it'll go with Jiyeon x3
Looking forward to next update! :D <3
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