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kellen_1825 #1
Chapter 5: Ahah tao, xiumin and Kai was so funny please update soon. *kitty eyes*
kellen_1825 #2
Chapter 4: Ahahhah. Luhan so nice to her I wonder why Sehun was cold to me ehehe im such a feeler. love it.
kellen_1825 #3
Chapter 2: Awwwww so cute. ehehe
jooyoungieturtle
#4
Ayeeee ~ Thanks guys :333
I'll sure to update soon. jadiladiaolsdbhaoslj

You make me so happy ouo <3
ohshixun
#5
Chapter 5: hi new reader here! i really like ur story, update soon! :)
Forever_without_love #6
Chapter 5: OOOOHHH! ______ is in danger! *shock* update! :)
Forever_without_love #7
Chapter 1: HAHAHA! an interesting story i see.....i like it!
baby_exotic
#8
Chapter 5: hehe i like the plot! update soon~ xD
kellen_1825 #9
Nice plot you got. Its interesting.
dearBias-3WordsToSay
#10
Chapter 3: \claps/ i like the plot even though it is just chapter 3...xDD
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gwiyomimi
#11
Chapter 3: omg. updaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaateeeeeee. ~ <3
Sehun is so adorable!
foreverachild #12
Chapter 1: nice, i like it :D, haven't seen this type of storyline before, very unique :D.

A small piece of advice; watch out on how you structure your sentences, cause sometimes it can disrupt the flow of the scene :)
jooyoungieturtle
#13
Chapter 2: ASDFGHJKL ~ thanks guise :3 *throws hearts at you* <3
LittleGlazyMe
#14
Chapter 1: I like it! I hope you update soon.
musiclovergirl86
#15
Chapter 1: It sounds interesting and a bit different from usual fics. Update soon!!!