Chapter 13: You did make me laugh once again. That ____ scene was amazing. So funny. I love how their charactersare developing. You're a great writer in that the story is humorous but it's not at the expense of character and plot depth which I've found in a lot of comedy fanfics.
Chapter 13: haven't finished reading yet but the second part with junmyeon disturbed me. like wtf? suchen is one of my otps in exo and they will do this ajhfajkfhjahfajhfk omg wae? luna i love you in rl really but here, you are a . and just because of a stupid bet, vic and gyuri.
just ohmygod. and myun you are such... idk... a naive person? gahd. they're not kyyu-line for nothing seriously
Chapter 13: I think I just died laughing.
I was so exhausted for a long time (the after-effects of going to SMTOWN, I didn't know it'll last that long >.>) and this just cracked me up, A LOT XDD
Chapter 13: OMFG MORE AWESOMENESS.
more awkwardness more funny. AND SMTOWN PEEPS TOO.
whoot. I WUV THIS STORY >__<
I've probably said that a million times ._.
"Catch me my balls! If you don't stop I'll give you to your fans as a Christmas present!"
I laughed hard at that. Really.
I LOVE THIS STORY. It's.. Like you wrote, realistic. Most stories will have a couple who's gay then POOF their circle of friends are gay too. I enjoyed this chapter a lot! Thanks for writing! ^^
Chapter 13: LOL
so i was pretty much dying when kai luhan and lay had their little "experience"
i think my favorite part of your story is the awkwardish ual moments when they get caught in the most offputting weird moments
and adding idols from other groups is fine and it does make it more realistic but i think if it has nothing to do with the actual plot it shouldnt be added
Chapter 13: Oh maaaay gawd
this is toooo awesome
i can't stop laughing after that's earplug removed.. LOL
i want to cover xingie's embarrassed face from wufan
and..... do you have mp3 of sehunnie donal duck voice???? that must be adorable...
yea yea...
and kris start to notice his feelin toward yixing,, doesn't he??
hwaaaa my KRAY FEELs
thanks for updates author nim~
forgive me for my horrible english
update soon ASAP, i'll always waiting for this.
^^
and for leader suho, u get it wrong, pleaseeeeee
hope KaiLayHan don't get so much trouble from managers T_T
Chapter 13: Oh, God! Soon or later, they'll be in that awkward situation 'cos of their feeling towards each other :(
Yixing was jealous when Jess approached Wufan? XD
Poor Xing, he thought that he interrupted Kris' time with Jess :( Meanwhile Kris felt guilty 'cos thinking about Xing's that 'way'
Good God! What's Kris' tattoo? Not a bunny, so was it a rhino? Alpaca? Crocodile? Koala? Dragon? Unicorn?
I am so curious >.<
Awww ...! And HunHan scene is so sweet <3
Speechless with the ____ movie thing. I can't ...
The last Kray's scene ... can I squeal hard? AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!
Chapter 13: I like you adding all these random idols. It feels more realistic if they interact with other people in their agency and other people in general.
I really liked that they got embarrassed like that with the ____ -wiggles eyebrows- I'm looking forward to Kris slowly starting to like Yixing XD
Chapter 13: Huahahahahahaha I can't stop laughing to imagine how Luhan Kai and Yixing watching the ____ with wide eyes.
Can't stop laughing!
TROLOLOLOLOL!
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