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justkeepitjuicybaby_
#1
Chapter 12: SO FLUFFFFFFFYYYYY KYAAAA <333
kpoperrose #2
Chapter 12: Aww.. SOOOOO FLUFFYYYYYY
ItsyBitsy_Orchid
#3
Chapter 1: ooohhhh ~~~~ <3 <3 LayHan <3 KrisLay <3
dazzlingcolours #4
Chapter 5: If i was Kris that moment there i would have ignore Luhan, Lay and all them until THEY apologize to me u__u
Taemax #5
Chapter 12: aww, over already. :( Such an awesome fic!
tyboys
#6
Chapter 9: lol i just love that henry makes an appearance in this story, so unexpected xD (he's one of my favorite artists..) Lay, so cute! <3
NazIJunK
#7
Chapter 12: I'm crying right now...such a sweet happy ending ! OMG...
tariluvsjotwins #8
Chapter 12: My very first fic
sama
#9
Chapter 12: I SHALL EXALT THIS FANFIC TOGETHER WITH MY KRAY FEELS AS I SUCCUMB TO THE CORNER AND SOB IN A VERY VERY UGLY WAY. ALL THE FEELS IN THIS WORLD AND I HATE YOU BECAUSE I THOUGH THIS IS DONE ALREADY BUT UGH WHY WHY WHY FINISH THIS GDI /HEAD DESKS/ <3
Haloosh98
#10
Chapter 12: so much fluff /sobbing/
stringsintune
#11
Chapter 12: Heehee. This is so good and adorable. The teasing Kris does before he started dating Lay, then the fact that everyone knows that there's Kray even though they both tried to keep it a secret. Hahaha. Cutie pies. :''> And the fact that the fics not ty and its just full of fluff made it even better.
lecupcake #12
Chapter 11: i mean im so pissed today because of my roommate and i just really want to strangle her and im not that kind of person...so im all this emotional and i cant even react to a SHINee mv and BAP and Teen tOP perfs because i keep seeing my roommates face and it honestly displeases and ruin my mood......yeah im on the verge of crying because of anger...but im really okay now because of this fanfic....yeah im now officially shipping KrisLay...i hate you(not really)...because i super ship TaoRis but oh well who would not love KrisLay....okay buh-bye sorry for my blabber.
lecupcake #13
Chapter 11: everyone is straight until they turn gay...i like that. LOL. so my first fanfic from you is Fairytale and i really like it and one thing i learned is that you never really write and im thankful for that i mean yeah i do read it, even more . OTL. but im still not comfortable with the idea of reading mature scenes so im thankful that your fanfics are not like that....anyways, have i told you already that i really love your updates.........
lecupcake #14
Chapter 9: i really dont read fantasy but you're my fave author in the whole wide world and your recommendations are really jjang so tell me, would it be worth it to read Revolution?
AngelHeart18 #15
Chapter 12: Aww will there be a squel?
Fanxingege
#16
Chapter 12: Ahhhh I need more. I don't want it to be ended in here fufuu. I think sehun was really shipping kray from the first time haha. I liked this story, please make another kray stories~~
PrincessDia #17
Chapter 1: MATHEMATICAL!!!
I love this is so cute! Even with just a tease!! I'm seriously going to read it ALL in one go!
rogeeii
#18
Chapter 12: okay. i've finished all of the chaps first before commenting so be ready because here it is: OMG!!!!! dfhsjfhakd I just can't-.. I don't know what to say 'coz this is just too good! It's 11:20 pm here and I'm still squealing, giggling, laughing, coughing literally because giggling and squealing isn't enough and if i could scream this late of the night i would. Girl, you just did a great job! this is the first Kray fanfic I've read and you made it so memorable! I wasn't really expecting it to be ty. because that was so overused for me. I've read and watched a lot of it already especially yaios. And this is just a great treat for me after reading 48 hours and Step w/c are great EXO fanfics too if you have have read it too. Those were great but a bit heavy for the feels. So your fanfic just lifted all the weiights that those two fanfics gave me. And out of whole EXO OTPs it's Kray that I really love! And I think my cheeks are just going to explode anytime. The transition though is too fast. but I understand 'coz as you said, initially, you're planning it to be a oneshot. It was very nice, sweet, soft and just really gave the feeling of 'love'. I really liked that scene when it's Xing who initiated the kiss and Kris doesn't know what to do. Their characters were a total twist. All the members are so nice here~. So all in all you can say that I really like it! HAHA LOL XD sorry for this too long comment but i think you and your story deserves it! Hwaiting! :D bye-bye~!