Chapter 1: wow, ive just read this in one go and the ending was sort of.. anticlimatic? idk, it felt like the build-up was kind of lacking to me.. does this sound mean? lol, i hope you dint take it the wring way, but i think a little more.. descriptions were needed? like, through 2 lines of dialogue they do so many things and i thought it was kinda rushed. like, one moment they get out of the house and the next moment they're on a couch?? or maybe i blanked out while reading that part, idk. but overall, i think a few more "actions" would've made this story a lot more interesting! author-nim, fighting!
Chapter 13: i laughed. I cried. I was sad. I was happy. It was just so many emotions during this story that I have to make my first ever comment in this site. I absolutely loved. Thank you. And thanks to the person who recommended it.
Chapter 13: Awwwwwww come on,I was expecting them to get married and live a happily ever after even though Jongin had lost a part of his brain. Don't get me wrong the story was awesome and really sweet but you can't leave us just like that! Anyway you did a good job. Keep on with the good work <3
Chapter 13: It was such a beautiful story omg thank you for writing it I'm a crying mess with dried tears all over my cheeks down to my neck and I swear I've never been any uglier than this lol
Absolutely loved and enjoyed it, dear !?
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