Comments: Holding On [One-shot]

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heartitstacy #1
HOW DO I PUT UP MY SENTENCE FOR THIS. OMG THIS IS SO SO AMAZINGGG~ <333
funnylittlefishy #2
"Eunhyuk is sure that one of Donghae’s ancestors must have been a dog—only a dog can make that cute of a face"<br />
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agree! omg the cuteness... someday hyukkie you will realize all the love hae has for you <333
euisgelo
#3
Oh, stupid, wae dont you just accept him Hyukjae? ;A;<br />
Donghae waiting for years and now you give him high expectation...<br />
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//He cannot wait for the day that EunHae finally stops becoming a thing of fiction and, as Eunhyuk had put it during their fifth anniversary celebration, real.<br />
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Oh wait. Yes he can.//<br />
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YES WE ALSO CAN!! 8D<br />
monfishy
#4
omoooo.. i'm cryingg... one-sided love for a loong timeee... T___T<br />
hope he won't wait too long again..
Jileeah
#5
So cute!! And the line about Donghae's ancestor being a dog with the cute pout and all... AAAHHH!!!<br />
And sequel, I would definitely want to read! Write one no? ^^
ifallelsefails
#6
Omona, this is so cute, I'm about to cry! :((<br />
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Keke, it's just touching how Donghae had that one-sided love through all those years, must be very painful :( And I'm proud of him for having the guts to confess! Ahh, cry baby Donghae, it's sooo adorable :D<br />
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AJ_hyukkie #7
first i started to love your fic, then i started to love you! you're such a talented writer~
themagiczebra
#8
PIKAKYULOVE: Donghae asked if Eunhyuk was turned off by those things because if Eunhyuk found those things about Donghae terrible, then it would take MORE time for Eunhyuk to like him because it's either Donghae has to do something about those imperfections of his or it will take Eunhyuk time to see past those things and likes Donghae for who/what he is despite his flaws. ^^ LOL, I hope that clears things up. =]
PikaKyuLove #9
OH AND THIS! "At that very moment, Eunhyuk is sure that one of Donghae’s ancestors must have been a dog—only a dog can make that cute of a face."
PikaKyuLove #10
This story is ADORABLE! My favorite parts:<br />
"'I’m sorry, Fishy,' says Eunhyuk as he rubs Donghae’s back with one hand. 'Monkeys can be very insensitive,”<br />
"'Wait for me. Right now you’re just my best friend, just my brother, but wait for me. Wait for me to feel as you feel, to think as you think, to see you as you see me. I don’t know why but…I just know that if you wait for me and keep holding on to your feelings, I will be able to get to where you are and this whole thing won’t be one-sided anymore. You…you won’t have to hurt anymore,” Slowly, he lets go and looks at the other. “If you hold on just a little longer, I will be able to find that part of me who loves you back. It exists—I can feel it—but it needs time to leave its cave and finally be with you and take care of you. When that time comes you will not have waited for nothing because once that part of me surfaces, Donghae, I am yours forever,'"<br />
AND! <br />
"'Eunhyuk, what did I tell you about bullying Donghae?” says the leader, grabbing his jacket from the couch. “Did you deny EunHae again on Cyworld or something?'"<br />
I don't get the part where Donghae is asking if his bags and acne turn Eunhyuk off though D=
pauline_sujufamelove
#11
i like this :) please continue :) i'll be waiting~
keyluvsuju95 #12
gosh..i love your style of writing..it's full of emotion,love n eunhae!!XDXD<br />
i love your stories,,Dandelion Florets,Cry..it makes me cry,,T_T..anyways,i still love it~~^^<br />
i can see people are requesting for sequel..so i'm up for a sequel too~~>_< this one is too good to be abandoned just like that,isn't it?<br />
*sorry for the long comment,i'm just giving my opinion~~^^
tooyoungtodie
#13
Never fails to give chills...
golferox
#14
sequel!!! please??? it was so cute!!!
themagiczebra
#15
LOL. It seems that the number of people asking for a sequel is increasing. I'll think about it. :3
Yonghwace
#16
Please continue its sooo sweet :)
caitlinXxxcore
#17
awww that was adorable!!!<br />
love :D
m4z3lt0v
#18
cute! ^.^<br />
patience is indeed a virtue... hahaha!<br />
hae's waiting will soon pay off... and its sweet of hyuk to try... i think hyuk trying is enough proof for hae... i love it! <3<br />
and the very last line is the best! hehe... >.<<br />
thanks for sharing this one! ;p