And now I'm here today to read this fic again and I'm trying hard to compress my feelings over the sadness of this fic. It hurts yet it's beautifully written and made my heart broke so much. I love you!
Chapter 13: Heart-breaking story. Its written beautifully that make us burst tears full of emotions. Sometimes its make me realized how frightening it is the power of a great author that managed to affect our own emotions. However I still hope that a saying that a true great literature is mostly is a sad story are not true at all. Because this world already mostly full of sadness that sometimes we need to spread the happiness in our life >-< Anyway, thanks author this good writing and hope u keep up the great works<3
Chapter 13: Waitwaitwaitwaitwait hold on. When did baekhyun die? Holy i cant believe i never saw that.
That aside....you broke my heart agan. I still haven't mend it yet from the other fic inread yesterday...but this is so heartwrenchingly good.....
Chapter 13: Goosebumps. goosebumps. Too many goosebymps. I'm reading the last chapter while eating breakfast with my mom, and Im honestly trying hard not cry cuz mom will probably find it weird if I just randomly started crying.... This is so sad, especially that baek is going to die T_T I really love how you tell the story, how you can make the reader feel what the members r going through... Like how Lay is trying to cope with it without worrying others, how Suho was trying to pretend he's fine but he's rlly not... Thank you for writing a great story
Chapter 11: Can I just saw how much I liked this story? I really did love it, it was so nice. I'm re-reading this again for the hell of it. I'm proud of myself for not getting confused and that I was quick to understand everything that happened. I love how you wrote it and how you showed more than told. You have all my support, thank you!
Chapter 13: you made me cry authornim... this is truly one of the most heartbreaking yet beautiful fic that i've ever read... woah im still shaking while writing this comment.... you're a great author... really great story..
Chapter 13: I'm sobbing this is not what I needed right now and I kept having to repeat to myself aloud "it's not real. They're ok. Its not real" and you're a poet and this is just........ Heartbreakingly beautiful in every way, shape, and form.
Chapter 13: This was a simply written, yet beautiful story. There are many authors out there that can captivate our hearts and minds with their detail-oriented and fancy vocabulary, but to be able to gift readers with your "tell not show" style yet add so many complex layers is truly amazing. Oh god I sound like a poet or something in the last two sentences XD
I found your story very intruiging and as an author I know that sometimes when what you write doesn't go exactly as planned, it can be worrying, but I think the way this story ended was perfect (and gave me way too many emotions) and it was because although maybe it wasn't planned, you wrote from your heart. Jesus I'm getting cheesy aren't I that's when I know it's time to get off the internet lol.
Long story short: I really loved reading this fic and thank you so much for posting such an amazing read! ^~^
Chapter 13: I'm glad that I found this fic.
Last few chapters did make me cried like..come on,, reading this amidst of Exo's current situations is making it looks real. and..unfortunately, Exo's upcoming comeback teasers will only feature their 10 members and reading this enlighten how our fandom would feel once they see either Luhan or Kris' absence.
overall, thank you for writing this story, author nim!
Chapter 13: This story is wonderful but terrifying at the same time....
It's the first time that I cry while reading a fanfic... so well written!!
I guessed right away (around the early chapters) that Luhan would die, and not Lay ... but I did not know when and how. I was afraid that I was having an anxiety attack while I was reading.
My heart was beating so fast ... and i was holding my breath... and everything seemed so true ... Every now and then I stopped and told myself that it was just a story that was not real ..But honestly I have to repeat it even now as I write this comment ...
The sentence "Jogin is now officially EXO's maknae" was the worst thing I red in all my life... It was beyond terrifying...I had to stop reading for a moment... It was so unespecting to me that Sehun would die... I tried to prepare myself for Luhan... but Sehun and that sentence... and Lay and Baek in the epilogue and the comment of it... You know how to make people freak out >_<
OK seems like I am only saying bad things( but this is not the case)... i'm still soo shocked... >_>...
My god! Keep writing because you convey emotion so well... but please write something happy and fluff (i'm going to check your stories after this >_>)!!
Thank you for this unimaginable story!! :)
Chapter 13: Oh gosh. This story was just so wonderful and unexpecting. I never would have thought that Sehun would die alongside with Luhan. I was hoping that all 12 of them would be living a happy healthy life but of course that didn't happen and now I'm just sad. Even Baekhyun dies and I feel so sorry for EXO even though this is fictional. I'm glad this is fictional because I want nothing as bad as this to happen to our amazing boys!
Chapter 13: Oh gosh. This story was just so wonderful and unexpecting. I never would have thought that Sehun would die alongside with Luhan. I was hoping that all 12 of them would be living a happy healthy life but of course that didn't happen and now I'm just sad. Even Baekhyun dies and I feel so sorry for EXO even though this is fictional. I'm glad this is fictional because I want nothing as bad as this to happen to our amazing boys!
Chapter 13: “‘You can’t make me go back in. I don’t want to please.’
Maknaes usually get what they want.
And.”
How could you do this!!!!!!!?!!?!?!!!!!!??!!!! ;A;
“Jongin is now officially EXO’s maknae.”
HOW COULOD YOUOILAHSGKJ
The end of chapter 10 and the whole of chapter 11 I had my hand over my chest iN SHOCK. WHYYY. oh ymskerjg
When Sehun and Luhan are in the car and he then understands it, I initially thought that he felt so sick because overall, all of EXO were going to die like in some plane crash or a car crash. Yeah. I'm sad and I cried while reading and I hate this. All that but I loved it because it's very emotion provoking which is what I look for in a fic. Wonderful work :)
Chapter 13: Oh.. My.. God... I'm almost leaking ;-; I REALLY DIDN'T SEE THAT COMING o.o although still confused with the story (I'll re-read again :3) and holy sh** the comment section is a spoiler minefield I'm glad I able to hold myself to see the comment section before reading this :p so go back/scroll up new readers if you don't want to spoil yourself :3 (if you want to spoil yourself then just proceed)
Chapter 13: ...BAEKHYUN is gonna die...Luhan DID die(seems like it or, too he "left" EXO physically)...and Sehun died (in fanfic)...'Jongin is now officaly EXO's maknae' seeing that line made my eyes widen and tears started to form, in the heat of the moment, but I failed to actually cry...... Yup heartless I am lol no but super sad yet lovely story Author Nim
Chapter 13: this storyline is the most unique storyline ever, in all honesty.
i'm still a bit confused... with the whole drama (like how luhan died and everything) but that's mainly because I was skimming through it (so i may not have read every bit of this story)...
but anyway! also this is the first non-romance story i've ever read on aff so XDDD good job!
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