Chapter 40: This is one of the best chanyeol/oc fics I've ever read. Mann.. i cried so much when yeollie found out and they broke up and stuff... author-nim are there any plans for a sequel? I just want them to end up together. *sighs* My poor feels.. T_T
Chapter 40: This will forever be my favourite Chanyeol fic. I reread it every time I want to feel all gushy inside, and when I wanna daydream about him hahaha. Honestly, that's just how much I'm in love with it!!! So light-hearted and cute, while the finale will always pose thought-provoking, insightful questions. It's funny, I'm sure most people would dislike the OC, but by the end, everyone just realizes how she's a young girl with flaws, victim to self-esteem issues and the hierarchies in high school... You cant help but feel frustrated all while rooting for her at the same time.
Each time I reread this story, I feel like I always discover something new--things I didn't realize before.
After rereading your last paragraph, my delusional self is convinced that things will work out between this couple. Especially with the line, "if this were a game, you'd have lost in the following second." This means she made her move, didn't she?! Despite agreeing to take things slow as friends, she made her move! Ahhhhh. I feel so content, even if it's all in my head! :)))
Chapter 1: Hello! Your story sounded really interesting so I decided to give it a go, but I find it rather hard to focus on the storyline because of your formatting, like how your "" are all <<>> because it makes it difficult to comprehend certain parts not to mention it's the incorrect english format! I hope that you will consider editing these to make it a better story! This is not a criticism but rather a feedback so I hope it didn't offend you! :)
Omg great fanfic I really loved your story I read it in one day and now I'm rereading it again
Nerdy Chanyoel is so cute :) omo I can't handle the feels ahh! :p
Chapter 41: I really loved your story, I finished it in 1day . I have some regrets now , I feel like I readed so fast and now that finished I feel empty. I really wish that the story would never end but of course haha it's impossible! It's was 38 chapters of beauty ~ I really really loved your story, I want to told you that you did a very very very awesome job, your fanfic is gold. I loved the story it's not something cheesy, cliché, that will never happens in real life. Your story was real, about mistakes that we can made... We can easily go into the story cuz it's really a simply beauty story . I don't know how to say it >_< Anyways I juy want you to say that I really loved your story, all the chapters we're captivating. Its was 100000% of pure beauty. u wish I could say more but English is not my first language and shame on me for my level! Hahah Again: THANK YOU VERY MUCH AUTOR NIM! KEEP GOING LIKE THIS! I will support you! Omo I fell like I writed pretty much, usually I'm just a silent reader. I just write some few comments sometimes and I think it's the first time that I write this much! I really enjoyed your fic and I think it is one of my favorite <3 Than you again and again
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