Chapter 19: You're welcome!! I'm not finished with this story yet but will be continued tomorrow because it's 1 in the morning right now. Love this story and will continue reading your others! Btw, I ship BaekEun so I hope they'll end up together!! ^^
Idk I don't even feel I can have the rights to critic you, since just by a glance you and I can tell I'm the worse author. Oh dear.
I am a fan of some things hanging/untold, though sometimes it can confuse me if misused. But since writing about this topic is as tricky and confusing as heck (I ever tried to write about fantasy and I myself is confused.as.heck. haha) I guess it's ok
But since so far I haven't felt any confusion in SMP, SMP!Extra, and AFAA so far, so I guess you turned out that you fixed this? That's good^^ golly, I feel ashamed right now. Teehee
Anyways, other than this confusion over Mina and several other things I can't seem to remember (I guess I'm a Lay type of person......), I have no other complaint over this story! Grammar and vocabulary are perf, even if there's an error I can't seem to notice, the prime characters on this story developed, plus I love your writing style (and you lurb BaekYeol! Me too! I don't ship them gay though....)!
And I just realized..... I just freaking reviewed your fanfic. Oh dear. Hope you didn't mind this very long comment. Oh! And don't take my rants seriously. After all, you're the author and it's up to you to decide things on your story and my comment is just a... comment (way to go Captain Obvious!).
Please always keep the thought that you and your stories are AWESUMM!!! in mind~^^ I hope that any of my words didn't annoy/offend you in any way, and if you did get annoyed/offended, sorry in advance! I didn't mean that^^ keep the great work on 'wow'-ing me all the time going on!
P.S if you noticed that I didn't comment on SMP (you probably wont xD), I actually read that on my exam period and I don't really have a time to comment. I'll comment when I got the time to re-read!^^
P.P.S gosh this is getting uncontrollable. Good luck on reading all this.....
P.P.P.S I should really get some sleep since it's 5am and I haven't even blinked a sleep....... (if that makes sense for you...)
Anyways, I know it's a bit late that I decided to comment on this, but I really love how Chanyeol is being a very great best friend to Baekhyun. He cares about him, he supports him, and he would've knock some sense to him when needed. A good friend would tell you off, a bestfriend would punch you in the face....
Chanyeol didn't want Baekhyun to do the same mistakes he did and that's really sweet. Plus he's sort of team BaekEun's first member, so..... hahaha. So the saying that best friends got each other's back through thick and thin is true, eh? I've got a lot of friends, but no bestie... sad for me, eh?
Another thing that popped to my mind, how did Naeun get into EXO Planet? Because she and Baekhyun wished for the same thing at the same time? That's always my theory but idk.... probably you just let it be to left your readers hanging XD
Adore the BaekEun sweetness over the chapters but I guess I won't be up for it. I'm not really into sweet things, just like Kai. Speaking of Kai........ now that your braids are gone I VOLUNTEER TO BE YOUR GIRLFRIEND KIM JONGIN /inserts that 'i volunteer' meme/ (Since Chanyeol is with Mina and HunHan might've spend more 'bro time' together... my top 3 is gone boo-hoo) .....oh dear please forget that, I'm shameless lmao
Since I read your 3 newest works, I realize that you made some progress. I don't know where to point my finger to, but I just know that there's progress just by reading it.
I can only compare this with SMP, since both stories are completed. SMP didn't confuse me at all, probably because of a simpler, more relatable plot? Idk, writing about things we aren't can be tricky, let alone writing about deaths, angels and Heaven. And I know writing things that relate to time is really tricky, so I understand that you confuse me with the whole Mina situation. I undertand completely that you want to left things a mystery, but sometimes a bit of more explaining is actually better?
Sometimes, imagining things for me is a lot funner than you setting on everything~ I guess our likings in how to end fics are the same! Teehee
Even so, I'm glad you end things in a hanging way, but still informing the readers that the cast will be living happily.
I'm glad that you decided to reunite Chanyeol and Mina. Before I always imagined that Mina would somehow being included in the ending, but not meeting Chanyeol or the rest of the gang. I always imagined that when the group is busy rejoicing, someplace in a hospital Mina would slowly open her eyes, calling out Chanyeol. But since everyone's imaginations are different... besides I also like your version of Mina's and Chanyeol's 'new beginning'!
P.S I love how you included Hasung. I would imagine Baek being inspired to be a doctor and he would begin his trainee days in that same hospital, and Hasung being his mentor. Wouldn't that be sweet♥
Usually, something really good might have its minus points too. I can't help but to feel very confused at some things.
For example: Mina. Baekhyun and Naeun first met 10 years ago, and by then Chanyeol is already an angel; meaning Mina is already in a coma by then. You mentioned that Chanyeol and Mina would've been in the same age right now, and Mina got into a coma when she was 19. So would she be at least 29 when they met again? And He turned EXO human to their physcial ages or what? I mean, if He turned Chanyeol back to the age when he died, does that mean she's 9 years older than him...... so I'm a little confused in that. Ehe
It's touching how the EXO members went against the rules and go fight for Naeun
(Plus they can showcase their powers, maximum level! XD) it seems that the mighty angels called EXO got something really dear to fight for. They did develop attatchments (no! Not the word I intended to use. Hate when that happens) with Naeun.
And how all 12 surrounded her in the end... oh dear God. It's heartbreaking, I tell you, heartbreaking! Especially with Sehun's and Baek's reactions; Sehun denies the truth for a while before it struck him hard and Baekhyun is too devastated to do anything. He was silent with tears unconsciously pouring down. In my opinion, that reaction is the most sad and painful, alongside with those kinds of crying when you lost your soulmate/parent. Props for you to describe the scene so well into words!
And the ending.... I really love endings like those. It's like a new beginning, you know? A new beginning which is still a mystery to the cast and the readers. I always wondered how would EXO do to pay the bills and stuff (and how they would crash BaekEun's honeymoon by secretly boarding into the plane those two would use, booking seats behind them just to yell 'Boo!' and 'Surprise!' when they're all on board to scare the hell out of them (and to piss Baek to the max haha). Idea courtesy to Xiu, Kai and Channie. Classic pranksters.)
Mind if I share a bit of my imagination with you? Yes? No? (Asking isn't really necessary since I'd share them anyways XD)
D.O would be a chef & eventually own his resto and Suho will be the manager, Xiumin will be the childish preschool teacher that always help the boys set up pranks while Chen would team up with the girls; sarcastically mocking Xiumin and the boys all the time.
I always imagined that some of the guys' powers are actually 'connected' with their human lives; like how Lay ends up being a doctor and Chanyeol is a firefighter.
Remind me of how stupid I was for not reading this earlier? I mean, I remember I stumbled upon this fic when it got featured last year and totally ignored it; simply because I thought 'the author wasn't creative enough to the point he/she named his/her fanfic over a song' (hahahaha please don't kill me!). I feel like facepalming right now.
The title really fit the story. This is basically about a girl who somehow went into a foreign world to meet her angel. Plus Baekhyun is from the group EXO and I don't know if EXO-KM is named after EXO Planet or the opposite, but basically EXO Planet is Baek's and EXO-K's world at that moment; thus the name 'Into Your World'. I feel that somehow you'd come up with a name similar to this even if 'Angel' wasn't released. From this day forward I at least learned a lesson; do not judge a book by its cover. Hahahaha
Cause seriously this story didn't match my judgement then. I won't comment on every single detail because it would be as long as a chaptered fanfic, flooding the box with maybe hundreds of comments. Oh, dear.
So I guess I'll just comment on things I remember most for now (this is a bad habit of mine. Every time my brain receives a lot of happenings, it gets overwhelming and I would sometimes miss the details I wanna talk about, but forgets about them and remember them again when I'm finished with my comments XD)
Since the latest chapters I read are the last ones, I think I'm going to start with them first.
The last chapters when Naeun was about to die made my eyes water. I don't know if it's because it's not heartbreaking enough, I was still reminiscing over EXO's hilarious antics (real life and in this story...), or I was just back from a fangirling session over Henry's mini-album and EXO's MuBank stage (there aint any bandanas on Chanyeol! Praise the Lord!)
Chapter 49: The first time ever, I've cried from reading a fanfic. It was beautiful I mean very, very, beautiful. I'm glad tht you made it to a happy ending. I hope you'll doing a great job in the future. And THANK YOU for writting this fanfic.
Chapter 49: I literally just read this in 3 hours about... It was sooo good! I cried a little and my heart hurt so bad but it was so good. I love that the stupid bully got taken to his rightful place and that yeollie got to me with Mina again~ ^^ I love your story! You should write a sequel. Lol jk I read your blog post and I understand completely. Hmm I just have so many things that want to say about the story! I won't though.. Haha I'll go read another one of your stories now! Bye and thanks for writing an awesome story!
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