I read this a few days ago but only remembered to comment today. Sorry.
So honestly, this is one of the best Kris fanfics I've ever read. I can just relate to Kris's anxiety when Sarah told him not to message her anymore. And when the other dude started dating her, I was like "The heck? NO!! Kris!! He's living the dream you wanted." Or at least that was what I assumed. huhu
Idky but I really loved the part when Kris started messaging Sarah. The messages were comical. Especially the bit where he replies "I am?!" when Sarah asks or was it states that he's a guy (don't exactly remember). Totally loved it.
I also liked how you added those 'slice of life' bits. Like when she was about to start spazzing over Kris. hahaha
But it was weird when Sarah was judgmental over the way Kris responded in first person. I mean, I'd answer in first person if someone asked me a question like that even if I wasn't Kris. But please don't take it as an offense, I'm not criticizing you miss author.
KREASE KREASE KREASE!!!! kbaii.
P.s I just realized that I like typing long comments. Maybe cuz I have a lot to say. rlab
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