Chapter 45: That is brilliant nano technology indeed~~~ :3 but let's just hope it won't be happening/develop in society, too much power :/
AND YAY FOR YONGGUK/JIEUN!!! I've always wondered about their ship name...BangSong? (lol, broadcasting couple XD)
Chapter 45: WHOA. ____ GOES DOWN IN THIS CHAPTER! :D I LIKE!
One thing I noticed: "Do know anything of the horrid of these things you have dedicated years of money on?!" should probably be something like "Do YOU (for obvious reasons) know anything of HORROR (because horrid is an adjective) of these things you have dedicated years of money TO (because to always follows dedicated; it's an expression or something)?!"
Also, the ending was adorable! Happy New Year! Stay awesome! :)
Chapter 45: I like that you put some thought into the bloodbots, but there are still problems (yes this is necessary. you know me. don't start.)
If you're able to saturate the bloodstream, I'm assuming these things are really small. But if they're acting like stem cells, they shouldn't be that small - red blood cells are tiny. So how does that work? Also, are you assuming they also carry with them almost infinite resources to heal wounds that quickly? That bit always annoys me... you can't heal that quickly unless there's more to it.
I see only two solutions: either magic or the bloodbots are extradimensional and are bigger on the inside. Obviously.
Also I like your ending bit but there was less screaming than I would've hoped...
Chapter 44: No no no! No one dies! As in like the main characters. Noooooooo! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! Kae freaking shot Daehee, right right? Please don't die Daehee. NOOOOOOOOOOO. I'm getting very emotional right now.
Anyways, oh lord. Daehee may not be my favorite char, and I liked reading her getting the crap beat out of her, but nuuuu. Not death...or so we think. Oh Daehyun I get the feeling I know what you did. >_< Aigooo...
Chapter 44: OK NO WHAT IS THIS MADNESS
I TOTALLY SAW THIS COMING OK
BUT SERIOUSLY
KAE IS CRAZY AND SHE NEEDS HELP OK
DAEHYUN WHY DIDN'T YOU HELP DAEHEE YOU HEARTLESS FOOL ASDFGHJK,L.;
CRYING
CRYING
FOREVER CRYING
thanks for messing with my emotions at this time of the night OTL
Chapter 44: Hmm, not entirely what I should say about these last few chapters. They're great, but at the same time, becoming a bit irritating. I understand, and love the use of, surprise. But, there's just a bit too much surprise in the end. If anything, I think it would have been better if you had foreshadowed Kae earlier on in the story. Then everyone would have been like "GASP! I know her! GASP! What is she doing to her friend?" But, I do understand you wanted the element of surprise.
Also, I know you're going to have DaeHyun explain what he did to his sister that wouldn't allow her to die, but please understand, from a realist reader's point of view, it becomes a tad irritating when a character - specifically the author's character - alludes death as much as DaeHee has. Don't take this as me being a b****, because I still like the story - for the most part.
Sorry about the lack of responses recently... Finals, band, being out of town and what not.
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