Chapter 50: Quote Kim Taeyeon, WOW AWESOME! It's amajjing!
You might not think you're improving or anything, but I think you are, just a little bit. Given, the writing itself is very simple, but I think that's more of your style than anything. One thing I do recommend you try if you're looking to improve your writing is to try reading other writers' fanfics! There are some amajjing ones out there, especially at SSF and 3981stories(.wordpress.com)
And if/when you ever do decide to come back here to AFF specifically, I have no doubt that you'll be much better. I mean, your first and last chapters are already very different.
And of course, OT9 over OTP any day kekekkk *U*
Chapter 50: SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL!!!!! WAAAAAH! maybe in the sequel taeyeon will continue her studies then jealous tiffany will be born because taeyeon will be the crush ng bayan... hahahaha
tahnk you hwaitaenggo! you're such a blessing.. hehe
Chapter 50: omg. I have read this story! hahaha! sorry.. i fail.. though i hadn't read it yet.. nice ending:):) hehe.. and the confusion about hayeon and hyoyeon? LOL!
Chapter 50: Taeyeon: Unbelievable. Unbelievable. Surprise. Wow. Amazing. (Lol)
Ang ganda author! Kawawa naman si Haeyeon! Nainvade na yung innocence niya... Poor kid. Lol... Hahahaha that cracked me up! It was a nice ending. :) i hope to see more stories from you, author.
At si Taeny! Yung pinaplano nila hindi nagwork...nanaman. Haha palaging may interruptions ke wala sina Sooyoung o nandyan... Dapat kasi author turuan mo silang maglock ng pintuan para hindi nasasayang moment nila. Hahaha. XD Sana gumawa ka din ng epilogue ng ibang couples dito but oh well, still great. Full of Taeny <3
Conrats! Your story is a success! *throws confetti and hugs you* you did great! -thumbs up-
woooohooo!!!!! happy ending..it was a good thing Tiffany get hurt first..at least she learnt something from it..u cant live by yourself forever..
*throws confetti* congratulation to you..nice story..
proud of u dongsaeng*sobsobs*
Chapter 49: Wowwowowowow Taeyeon is staying!! It's party party!! Lemme hug you, author, for having such a nice ending.... -hugs you tightly until you can't breathe- I really love the story AND it's not stupid at all.... It's really brilliant and well-written. :)) Don't mind the haters.. You actually have more supporters than them. :))) Let's just spazz together that TaeNy is happy and hey will be together!! Yey! :)) thanks so much for all the efforts in updating.. And even going to make a pdf file. Wow you're really great!
Chapter 48: You know what, the whole Mr Hwang's plan is really really stupid, why make his niece suffer the pain when he can give her happiness from the start. He knew that TaeNy is in love with each other but he still proceed his stupid plan to make them break up, to make them sad, to make them cry. I think his plan is like cutting somebody skin then give them a first-aid kit, the wound will be healed but the scar is still there
Playing with somebody's feeling is a very bad thing and this plan is like toying with Tiffany' feeling
I feel bad for Tiffany to have bad uncle and bad friends
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