Chapter 5: I'm a bit confused with the fangs thing. They got an injection to be vampires?
All that talking about food made me hungry. Until they began speaking about a different type of food, haha.
So Kris sensed something about the girl, that's great news.
Chapter 5: I think you describe one point too much, i don't know maybe you want to describe who they are what they are up to but it will be good if you don't explain it int heir cinversation just describe it alone. Idon't know how to explain it heol but this is interesting and i hope next chapter kris will meet yijung again.
Chapter 4: Depression is serious and it will be dangerous if no one knows. I think this story will be long because you really write the little detail and make all cast get exposure it will take time for yijung knows who kris is and their live will complicated but fun because maybe their personality is different.
Chapter 4: The way Luhan talked was so meaningful and wise, I really enjoyed it.
It made me think of Jonghyun and the existence of many others just like him.
It's sad, everyone should be careful about what they say or act.
Unfortunately, Luhan's description about humans is so true.
Chapter 3: I felt so bad for her at the restaurant. Hope she could enjoy the meal without being too stressed about the location.
Also, why are they divided in two gangs, so to speak? I'll probably find out in the future chapters, but caught my eye.
I want to find out, but I'm also scared about the prey thing.
The story is nice, I like the interaction between the boys, Tao is so funny in his relationship with Kris. The others are cute too.
Fighting!
Chapter 3: I miss read kris story and this fanfic make my day. And this is really good story. But can i suggest something? You give your every lead here a pov and i will honest that sometimes i skip reading it if its not kris and yijung so i hope later you make more kris and yijung pov and less other pov iam sorry. But this is really good story and i will always wait for next chapter. I hope you continue soon.
Chapter 2: This is so interesting you even put chinese conversation in there i can learn it again haha kinda forget some Chinese words. Lol .. I love it already Kris didn't even noticed yijung where with him when they in the elevator.
Chapter 2: I can't believe Lay didn't do anything. And in his own bar, omo.
Their relationships is so cute though.
I really like the layout. It suits the story.
Chapter 1: Nice and mysterious. I'm curious what did Kris mean about Tao being careful he doesn't fall for a prey. And I can't wait until I meet the others.
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