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nancy3
#1
Chapter 8: can i still apply?
BlueVitamin
#2
Chapter 3: ah thank you for the review! i was worried i didn't explain him well enough bc i was lowkey dying the entire time lol but im glad you liked him <3
sweet_lava
#3
Chapter 13: I cant waittt hahaha ..... take your time author-nim:)
KezMer
#4
Chapter 4: Oh its fine. I can relate to school projects piling up and having so much to do.
KezMer
#5
Chapter 13: Nice teaser about the students in the Atmosphere. Excited to see the first chapter!!
KezMer
#6
Chapter 3: Thanks for accepting my 2nd character! Sorry about those english grammar errors hahaha. So to answer the questions. He heard the rumors through the students when he was outside of his apartment. Specifically in a small cafe. Wenji is the same Wenji as the applicant.
hungrypusheen
#7
Chapter 3: Thanks for the review! I fixed all the changes. She doesnt have a brother, it was Jisoo's brother that was mentioned in her app.
overloadinq
#8
Chapter 3: Thanks for the review! I fixed the part you mentioned in both of their backgrounds.
As for Yitian, I meant that he's only distrustful when it comes to letting people get too close to him. So he has many friends, but only a couple closely selected ones are close to him and he trusts and they truly know him. And he's gullible when it comes to everything except friendship wise. Like do you get what I mean or does it not make sense? ^^"
LayBinTao
#9
Chapter 3: If I may ask how long have the sanctuaries operational? and can powers be hereditary?
Layni17
#10
Chapter 3: Thank you for the review! I'm glad you like Masayuki~ Don't worry about not writing your thoughts down, I kinda wrote a lot so there was a lot to read. XD
lucidhoney10
#11
Chapter 12: Anyway, I can't see Yu Mei's name in the student ID? Is there something wrong?
stormatsea
#12
Chapter 3: Thank you for the review and for accepting Gayoon!
Sorry for the confusion Jace did stay in New Zealand.
As for her powers yeah she can touch an object and then it into a card as well as control them. It's like telekinesis but she can only use it on playing cards, but she can manipulate them any way she wants to.
sweet_lava
#13
Chapter 11: Teaser two is already interesting for me, I can't wait for the story to start!!^^ Don't delete the updates~ It helped me to create my character's app so some people might get some help from that chapter too hehehe
lucidhoney10
#14
Chapter 11: Teaser two is up >< I'm excited to see the full story~ anyways thank you for accepting Yu Mei ^^
KezMer
#15
Chapter 11: Oooh a teaser that relates to characters who refuse to leave!
BlueTyphoon
#16
Chapter 3: I fixed the errors for Seosik and H-18
lucidhoney10
#17
Hello, first of all thank you for sparing time looking onto my application, reviewing it, and even giving me a consultation. I just want to inform that I had been doing the change on my application. I hope it will meet your liking this time around ^^;
Kroujin
#18
Chapter 3: Hi! Thanks for the review! I did the changes! Hahaha the drama part was just something i came up with hahahhaa!
Minyoungie-Lee
#19
Chapter 3: Yeah, sorry about that. XD
Tsuki and I were writing together so when we were talking about it, it made sense to us at the time. I forgot no one knows the plot except for us so-- Whoops.
Thanks for accepting him~
Layni17
#20
Chapter 3: Thank you for the review! So, when it comes to her personality, I don't actually see how those traits conflict, personally. Her sensitive trait actually connects with the warm trait- It's sensitive, like, very emotional so she becomes emotionally invested in people with makes them feel cared for. But because of that, she makes their problems and failures her own. And that even connects with harsh, because when she is disappointed she becomes harsh in terms of trying to push others too hard. Does that make more sense??
As for the rings, MiYeun really wasn't into fancy stuff so she wanted a simpler ring for her wedding ring than what Jeongmin proposed to her with. But I get why you might think otherwise, because that is generally true.
I am sorry to hear about your sister. If you ever need go talk, I'm always here.