Hey my name is Su and i review fanfics, you can visit my profile for details. Okay so i gotta say i really like your story but a big problem is that the chapters are a little short, i think it would be better if they were just a bit longer. Another thing is that Woohyun is too annoying, you gotta make it seem real. If he really was a playboy he wouldn't be so clingy, it has to be a little more realistic. Other then that I really reallly like your story, especially the plot. I love fanfic where a nerdy girl turn into a hot girl after a boy breaks her heart. And i'de like to also say that once i subscribe to a story i'll support it 100% so FIGHTING!!!
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