Chapter 25: Awww this is such a sweet message!! Thank you for this heart-warming story! *-* I laughed a lot, especially in the beginning, the boys were hilarious and tipsy Younghyun is the best. ;) Thank you for motivating us to keep going and keep working hard but let ourselves have a break from time to time. ^^
Take care! <3
Chapter 25: Okay I'm crying ㅠㅠ this is so beautiful <3 the very moment that i love is when finished the exams and going to holiday and have fun together. I still remembered when i began my study... Its very desperate when i cant choice my dream major... Even i hate it i must keep going and by time to time i find my happynees in it and i still can doing what i want as my hobby. Be positive is one of my recipe in life XD Happy New Year author-nim and everyone!!! Hope 2018 going to be an amazing year to you all!!! Happy Holiday too ^^
Chapter 25: awwww happy new year to you >_< the last message got me teared up :") bcs this is exactly my situation.. i'm currently in my 3rd semester of college and i think of myself as a failure bc i haven't achieve anything to make my parents proud.. even my grades aren't that good enoughh.. but i have my friends telling me that 'it's okay, you've worked hard and it's an achievement for you' 'you've improved a lot since last time' so from now i will keep working hard to chase my dream and i will try to improve to be the better me hehe ^^ thank you for the stories and congratulations for winning first place ♡♡
Dear contestant, damn, you worked hard in this last three months! Congratulations for finishing all these oneshots. I welcomed all of them with their variety from cute fluff to heartbreaking angst, you can write both genres really well. I enjoyed reading them all, I especially liked those stories that contain detailed descriptions because you have really nice way with words. Your ideas was varied and the plots were well structured. It was rare I felt anything forced. In case of oneshots it’s a hard thing to do alongside with conveying strong emotions but the Heartbeats one really tore me apart. Although, sometimes your POV changes especially between “I” and “You” felt a bit unnecessary and it broke the nice flow, but it wasn’t the case in most of the stories. I would suggest you to be consistent with POVs in one story. The titles mostly fit the stories well and it was easy to follow them with the added names. Concerning punctuation you are missing a comma when it comes to the usage of Y/N and greetings and sometimes you use tilde in your sentences which I am sure isn’t the proper written English usage of the character. However, all in all, all of your stories provided me wonderful readings (my faves were probably boxer!Dowoon, roommate!Jae, Heartbeats) so thank you for participating and good luck with your future writings! Congratulations for winning our first prize!
Chapter 19: Gosh, this story was so cute i really cannot handle this fluffy thing at all. It made me smile and this happiness slowly spread all over my body (after i push post comment i will definitely dance again lol idk why but i got the vibes). Back to your story, i liked the way Brian and the girl got closer and closer. And those pictures and the fact that she liked him regardless of the fame. ^^ every single idol deserves a partner like her.
Have a nice night xx
Chapter 23: OMAYHGHAD! I KNEW YOU WOULD UPDATE! ?? EEEPPPP!!!!!
I LOVE THIS CHAPTER! LIKE I ALWAYS LOVE THE OTHER CHAPTERS! ONAYHHAD. JAE IS SO FREAKING EXTRA HERE BUT GOODNESS ME BRIAN KANG! ANOTHER GREAT CHAPTER!
Chapter 23: hi again!!!! merry (late) christmas and happy (almost) new year~~~~
i've read the previous chapters but i'm so sorry if i rarely post a comment bcs i got no time ㅠㅠ the thing is your writing always makes me FEEL the REAL emotion :""") seriously your works are beautiful!!! sometimes i read on tumblr too and then i re read it here lol xD
when you say that you'll be gone i feel like 'ah.. is this the end?' 'i'm gonna miss this series..' but then you come with this special chapter and IT'S BRIAN MY ULTIMATE BIAS OMG!!!!!!!! ㅡ and with the mention of youngfeel momentt and also jaehyungparkian and slight jaepil ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ ㅡ OH AND THERE IS THE USUAL CONFIDENT JAE ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ BRIAN? DOCTOR? reminds me of my ex soon-to-be-boyfriend was (and until now) a doctor (ok this is not important). BRIAN IS SO FLUFFY WHEN HE CHOOSE HIS CHRISTMAS GIFT AND WITH THAT MISTLETOE KISS-- AHFKGKDJFKFK I LOVE YOU SO MUCH ♡♡♡♡
Chapter 1: I'm reading this chapter while ignoring the fact that I have to wake up early tomorrow for work. But no regrets! It's worth it. Thank you for this one ^^
Chapter 23: WTF YOU KNOW MY BIAS WRECKER IS YOUNGK TT
I was actually SO FREAKING RELIEVED when you brought in Jae bc his line of "in no particular order with me" got me like " XDDD yes Jae! That is so him!" But then brian freaking waltz in like "hey you my gift now" got me like
asldihfgaerlbkjrleuafhaerughs NO JAE COME BACK IM LOYAL
AASDFJAERGJAELRGIJw and then the almost-kiss, forehead kiss, cheek kiss ｡･ﾟﾟ･(>д<)･ﾟﾟ･｡
It's not fairrrrrrRRRRRRR YOU'RE CHEEATTTINGGGG (pewdiepie reference)
Stop teasing me, I can't take it ˚‧º·(˚ ˃̣̣̥᷄⌓˂̣̣̥᷅ )‧º·˚ You're torturing my heart- i need to be more loyal
Chapter 3: Okay, I'm crying. It was so beautiful, to see how Brian became happy again but then, his love died once again. Gosh... I really cannot find the right words, it just hurts (but in a good way if it is even possible, so don't worry). It's a story everyone should read. It has a huge meaning, it shows that life always goes on no matter what and we have to stand up after we fell onto our knees. Damn... so much emotion, so much angst and hope. You did an amazing job on this one, too. <3
Have a wonderful day xx
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