Chapter 1: This is so cute! Somehow I stumbled upon a lot of stories with one of the main characters being blind, but every is different and yours is very surprising.
I love how Seulgi meets Irene by accident and from that moment on is totally fascinated by the blind girl. You described wonderfully how Seulgi is insecure at first because she kind of underestimates Irene but soon notices through her fascination with Irene that her new friend is very strong. I admire the way you implemented Jackson in the story, at first I had no clue how his constantly more rushed mornings were related to the plot BUT THEN, the "BOOM" it made once explained I was both shocked and in awe how well you constructed the plot!
How Seulgi is willing to spend a lot of her time with and for Irene is beautifully written and that she wants to give Irene back the trust she lost captured my heart.
You've done an amazing job writing this story, it was a real pleasure to read it! And congratulations for getting featured, you absolutely deserve it!! <3
Chapter 1: This is such a beautiful story. I love it. There were lots of part that I was very touched, there were tears in my eyes plus I watched a movie about a blind girl before reading this so it’s much more better. Anyway, congratulations on the feature.
Chapter 1: congrats on the feature!! i love the green lantern references and the part where Seulgu comforted Irene with the ring. beautifully written story thanks for that
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