Chapter 6: aw thanks for such a nice review. yes i think it is only natural for her to be selfish in a sense because of her background and the whole worlds state at the moment. and yes hahah i have no clue what degrassi next class is. I love Chris Evan so much.
Chapter 6: aww you're super welcome and yes i love Pango and thought to use her. haha
and yeah the Korean part isn't bad, but i assumed it took place in SK the first time and why i used a Korean-Chinese character. haha
and then i saw your FAQ and saw that it was set in the USA and yeah, why i re-wrote my girl to fit another ethnicity. :D
but hope you get lots of variety for sure though later on!! =]
the personality is short is because i thought it would be okay as she's a secondary character app. XD
and i felt like with her being the way she is, she'll build up on her own if she's chosen. ^^
but yes i figure the background would help out more since that's what i wrote last and to see how she came out to be. :D
i have to admit i was watching LIAR GAME when i was writing her and Tohru also come and mind and i noticed that Tohru was pushed into a new world that she wasn't used to, but still remained the same. :D
and haha the Kagome and Inuyasha love story is still my somewhat favorite anime love story and i really thought it fit Serenity and Sehun the best. XD
but anyways, thanks for the review and glad nothing really needs fixing and hope you'll get more apps that's not a double like mine. bwhaha
Chapter 5: okay. i submitted a second character.
hope she's fun to read?
not sure if anything make sense i worked here and there and yeah. lol
good luck and hope you get more!! =]
Chapter 6: ayyyyyyeeeeeeeee c: thank you for all the nice comments first of all !
secondly, would you like me to write some more? is there anything that you'd like me to extend?
thirdly her mother just chose not to use her husband's last time :) for no reason. honestly if I were to chose one it's because his surname reminded her of "masala chai tea" and she didn't like tea lol
Chapter 1: i realized while reading this FAQ, it's gonna make me change what i origially wanted to do with the second character, so gonna do it differently for her. lol
Chapter 4: hihi! and you're welcome and thanks so much for the review! =]
and i'm glad she's someone that fits the world of your story and yes i love her bond with her sister too. ^^
good to know it was easy to read and nothing to change and omg yes! the scene suggestion for them to see which god responds first would be so funny for them, but not the gods. xD summoned for nothing. lol
i love nanami and tomoe so i'm glad you loved it!! :D
anyways, thanks again and hope you get more applicants too!!
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