Chapter 2: You need a beta reader or an editor-if you will- ,
This story shows promise and I wish it had less grammatical errors, it's my biggest pet peeve and I could not read the Story further.
I hope you improve your writing. No offense.✌️
Chapter 27: Yes, YES, YESSSS!!!!
THIS is what I've been waiting all along >>> 1929!!!!! *squeals*
Ah~~so almost all my questions from the previous chapter had been answered!
I see~~so it's Jennie all along, huh? I mean....Lisa's soulmate! CRUEL fate though.....they're each other's soulmate but also born with the Blood Lass-Red Poison destiny.....><
Can't wait for MORE of 1929~~after all it's what I've been waiting for ALL ALONG!!! Almost lost hope in ever reading anything from that period! ><
[ Miyeon stood up and grabbed a bathtub]
[Jennie stood up from the tub and slipped the rub that...]
I think one's supposed to be "bathrobe" while the next's supposed to be "robe"???
Chapter 26: Arghh....too much information!!! Like a sudden burst of dam!!! ><
I don't think ....I'm understanding them?!!!
And the worst part is I'm not even sure what or which part I don't understand!!!! ><
Oh wait.....I think my biggest block is....Jennie-Aurie? I mean....IF it's Jennie all along, then where or what's Aurie's place in the whole damn scheme?! They're really the same person??? When did Jennie seal her own memory then? When Aurie died? So she actually did NOT die?! She didn't die back then but both hers & Lisa's memory got sealed (Jennie willingly, Lisa against her will?)???
Chapter 25: Chapter 25: i hope this one will be more updated ? it may beg somewhat to differ for what i dont really understand myself that I was totally intruiged or should i say HOOKED that i find myself on cliffhanger, ? the hell what im saying, but please updated, this is really some good though ?
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