Chapter 1: I'm not good with words but if i would describe this story with one word it would be masterpiece ,like srsly its so beautifully writen,from the plot to the characters and the combination of fluff and angst everything is perfect. Thank you author nin for writing it ,for sure this is one of my favs
Chapter 1: Wow This is so beautifully written I'm left gasping for air in some parts! It's funny, adorable, angsty, and squeal-worthy all at the same time!
Chapter 1: oh my god. i don't even know where to start.
oh i think i know. the opening quote. *insert i_have_a_question_how_dare_you_meme.gif here* that's--i don't even have the words. OTL
i've never really thought about seulrene in this type of setting, and i can't be anymore glad that i got to read it from you. you made it work is such an understatement.
the team dynamic. it starts off hesitant and wary, because joohyun is a thief that no one can really trust after all. and it's so in character for yerim and seungwan to be so taken with joohyun right off the bat. sooyoung's that one person whose trust is hard to earn, and idol!sooyoung does kind of give off that vibe. and seulgi's going to be that cactus joohyun can never fully grasp in her hands.
joohyun is also introspective in here, and really deep. the thing about the walls, that was just brilliant.
seulrene's development through the jobs they do, and the times they spent with each other. the rooftop moments. when joohyun had to kiss seulgi to get out of a sticky situation. i feel like i'm watching a movie as the scenes played in my head because you described them so well. (and i remember you saying you weren't good in writing action :P)
they're domestic and yet they're not. and you've managed to keep that feeling of "there's a catch. there's always a catch.", and you want to read the ending right away, but also want to read every word at least twice to savor the entire thing.
AND THE ANGST. i felt seulgi's pain holy . it sat in my gut for what felt like hours, much like the betrayal seulgi must've felt. just when she was starting to think that joohyun's gonna be a permanent fixture in their life, joohyun ghosts them. the heartbreak. </3
then hits the fan, and i've honestly never been more glad that we know each other because joohyun got shot and i've had enough of my otps getting shot lol OTL
that ultimate sacrifice though. they do say that the greatest act of love is sacrifice.
you tie it up perfectly with that plot twist in the end. plus the bastard who shot joohyun got his. seulgi probably would've landed a punch or two lol
bonus bits i squealed/laughed/loved:
- joyri as vengeful little s. i can totally see them messing with seulgi's shampoo so that her hair turns orange.
- "did Seulgi-unnie make your heart fly away too?" YERI WOULD
- PODOM. and him following joohyun around.
- seungwan is a saint, someone give her a medal.
p.s. i'm still hung up on that angst. i don't think it's going away anytime soon OTL
Chapter 1: WOW WOW WOW WOW this is so awesome jc really thanks a lot for writing this its been a while since i've read such a good one shot and hell yeah im up for a harrypotter au!!
This is completely a WOW story. Love it to bits !!!! I laughed so hard when Wendy had to jump and she was screaming for 5 mins and Yerim recorded it lmaooo xD
Chapter 1: Wow... you never failed to amaze us, authornim! This is so wonderful. I thought I won't cry while reading this but I was wrong lmao! I love this so much, actually I love all your works. Please never stop writing amazing stories. <3
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