Chapter 2: God I love hogwarts!au why are there not more of them, so glad this was recommended to me by undergroundmuses
I love the way all the relationships have developed, you're really good at capturing those developments and making them seem natural.
I did think that she was a werewolf because of the initial scene with the potion, but then... idk I guess I didn't catch the other symptoms and I thought she might have some other mysterious illness or other. Now that it's revealed that she's a werewolf, is that why her parents are... idk, disapproving, disappointed in her?? And was she born a werewolf or bitten? So many questions haha
And why would she want to go into the muggle world after hogwarts? I'm guessing it's because there's less prejudice against werewolves there but she'd be going from hiding that she's a werewolf to hiding that she's a witch AND a werewolf. I mean, who knows, if she became a healer and was really great at it like Yoongi says, maybe she could work on a cure for the werewolf bite/mutation?
Chapter 2: I'm soo glad I found this story! Love Yoonnie in this <3 Can't wait to know what happens to Jennie now! Nobody else knows, right? Never thought she was a Werewolf!! Excellent story :)
Chapter 2: What a great story! It's so well written, I enjoyed every chapter! Can't wait for the last one, I really hope it was longer! Amazing, just amazing!!
And yoonnie of course, I love the relationship that they have here!! <3
Chapter 2: So glad you updated, and what a great update it was! And whoa I had no idea about the big plot point (don't want to spoil), but now it makes so much sense! Thanks for the great chapter! <3
Chapter 2: holy first of all
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NO I DIDNT EXPECT THAT AT ALL? I GENUINELY THOUGHT SHE WAS ON HER PERIOD AND POMFREY IS GIVING HER SOOTHING POTION OR SUCH im baffled THAT IS SUCH A GREAT TWIST GOODJOB my heart hurts for her. now i will have to reread everything in context :""" oh this really changes everything
its always nice, your reverence scenes. how events put to motion and theres this solemn slowdown in all the right places. i think any feeling u want to invoke through those, theyre all conveyed nicely :)
i loooove lisa lol and her gryffindor trio WAIT I JST REMEMBERED ABOUT THE SHRIEKING SHACK THING HOLYF DONT TELL ME
anyway this was so good aves i kept looking at the scrollbar to check how far im through cz i dont want it to end. well done with this chapter too!! ^^ it's really, really something
Chapter 1: I love love bts x hogwarts!au!! Glad i had a chance to read this :) its only one chapter in but you write into the depth of jennie's character very well. All her feelings and insecurities about her future are conveyed very well. She feels very relable plus i love the chemistry between her and yoongi.
The "What the is digging into me?" line was hilarious! XD but seriously putting jennie x vinyl x yoongi together is genius!!
And i think you hav put together the hp universe and described it very well, i feel like im reading a hp book, so props to you in making the hp universe come alive.
Cant wait for more yoongi x jennie scenes ;)
Chapter 1: i am a die-hardcore harry potter fan, blackpink and bts supporter (as well as shipper) and yoonnie is one of my otps, so everything combined - this is one of my favourite fanfics!! i can’t wait to see how their story unravels, i think it’s pretty interesting and i like how they’re like secret friends. i hope yoongi is okay! goD DAMN WHY IS QUIDDITCH SUCH A VIOLENT SPORT (also you did fine! i couldn’t notice any errors, i felt like i was at hogwarts!)
Chapter 1: Oh my god I love hp and this is soooo good so far. I'm so excited to see how their relationship will develop. I really liked how they have this weird friendship going where they share things with no expectations and all. And damnnnn when Jennie stood up for Jisooo *clap clap* that girl can talk. I love how each character you chose are matching very well with their personalities. Like Lisa being the sporty prankster, Jungkook being a prodigy, JISOO AND TAEHYUNG YES and Chaeyoung being a polite nice girl. I'm looking forward to the next chapters! :)
Omg I love love hp so this is super interesting, I like all of your chosen characters. Also sehun in hufflepuff!! Welcome to the house, bae!! I'm also a hufflepuff btw
Chapter 1: It is soooo rude for u to call your work trash, Avalon. So rude. This deserves respect, this is perfect. Omg i cannot even beginn
Idk if its just story.. or im always like this.. but then again, your stories are the only stories i read at aff for like um...since the start lf 2017? But i always skip reading the foreword. So if i start reading, i pretty much jumping in blind. Best decision i made actually, especially for this one.
Theres a wrtiting tip i really pinning on-tell your main story at the 1st chapter. While this is apply to book, sometimes in fanfic, first chapter dont tell a lot about what is the story going to be about. Heck, even books sometimes dont. This is where this is greattt. Because you literally START your story. You start it from jennie, your main character, n then yoongi the second. (I love how u put in question at the end of the part. Thats a skill to make readers stay intrigued, bcs i really do), and then you follow little by little with the rest of characters WHILE describing jennie's characters and backstory. I really love how you're plotting this bcs yoongi is on another part of her daily life AND I LOVE THAT THE MOST. I love that how they started from vinyl (idk if thers vinyl in hogwarts but idt its too out of place?), how you can pretty much tell yoongi's backstory already, I REALLYYY LOVE THE PART IN THE BRACKETS. if i read this on paper, i will highlight the hell out of that part), i love how i'm like ahhhh so thats why the title is a little bit scandalous and have i told u how much i love scandalous story exactly like this one??? Again, best decision.
U put the end of the chapter at the part where the story will be developing to another level and that is geniusss. I'm very very lookong forward for the next development!
Thanks for the story, Avesss! u worked harddd n this is ABSOFREAKINGLUTELY AMAZING, dont u ever stop writing!
P/s : i lovee the character of the supporting characters? Jisoo with her motherly vibe n chaeyoung with her childlike. I mean, when i said i like jennie the most, its only bcs shes very pretty to me but idk them at all. N also the side story? Jisoo n V? Heheh thats cuteee
6k omg u did it! but i'm reading this on friday bcs i'm travelling tomorrow until then. (didn't know getting a job would make me this busy even before working--i just spent the whole day at the hospital today ugh)
dropping by to bookmark and say that i'm proud of you and i don't have to read it first to know you're doing really well! love you!
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