Oh dear, I wish I hadn't caught up in reading so quickly. That one chapter was so quick and I'm dying (I'm actually reading this on my bed xD) for another update. Wow, does everything have to be clear-cut for Jonghyun to finally act? Hmm, I guess that's what most would people do, anyway... God, Dae! That stupid liar, she knows she's guity and she may sound 'confused' only for the reason that she's been caught red-handed by her boyfriend whom she thought wouldn't even have any internet connections. You know, being a busy celebrity, and all. It's too unlikely to introduce another character in the story, and have that person post that comment to frame on Dae... Nah, I absolute do not want any sympathy for her if that were the case. I swear, Jonghyun should dump that and come to realise that Key is the 'one and only' for him xD
I know there is a shared narrations between SHINee and then to Key and Junghwa, I honestly really love Junghwa. He's probably the male OC, perhaps even the only OC that I'll remember after this story has finished, which I hope won't be soon. He's very, well, he's so light-hearted in everything he says (asides from the need to be serious) and he's well, he seems perfect if you forget that he lives in a shabby house... :D
Oh, update man! I can't wait until Key comes back and then probably Jonghyun and Key have this ultimate confrontation, but you cannot just remove Junghwa out of the story. He has to appear at the ending, or something. :)
Just like what I said on my previous comment, I would love to hear news of the four.
As much as I want seeing Junghwa and Key's POVs, I would also like to see the other members' situation.
P.S. Regarding the story, is the anti-forum mainly focusing on Key? Because it's quite contradicting, you see, to say that Key should be kicked out of SHINee because he might 'prey on the other oppas' that the fans... love? Ehe, I don't know :P
Oh my god. This is probably the most amazing, well-written fanfic I have ever read. Really. Starting off this story, I really hated Dae, but as I read on, I think you as an author started to question us whether she really is the antagonist... alright, I'm going to withdraw that claim because I just remembered her prejudiced views towards homouality, how she employs the sickly, sweet voice to Jonghyun...
You know, I really like Junghwa's character (is he a male OC?) in here. He seems to be a reflection of Key, a dual nature with which Junghwa basically acts out on Key's subconscious desires, in a certain way... I mean, Jonghyun is the only reason for Key's humanity, aside from his idol status, and he's like, really crazy about him! Like, over-the-top crazy, I don't think Key wouldn't mind too much over the idea in running away with Jonghyun, to start anew, if the public didn't accept him as being 'gay'.
Well, I loved your latest update. I think Key's hypocrisy is surfacing, as he claims that Jonghyun doesn't seem to notice anything around him 'just so long as he's fine in his own little world...' It was a selfish act for Key to just flee like that (despite of his drunken stupor), and drinking to begin with, he doesn't even begin to consider how it may affect the members, particularly Onew, who knows that he's head over heels for Jonghyun.
Eugh, anticipating for an update, now. Truly amazing, I loved how everything seems to blend well together. Your writing style is so good, and it feels so nice to finally read a good angst type of story, some authors kind of try too hard and it doesn't maximise the effect it should have on readers. Man, I am honestly, really jealous of your writing style xD But as far as I know, from reading this, I love it from top to bottom. Even Dae, who stirs up the storyline.
Man, what love can do to you... I know it screwed me up, Valentine's Day, particularly, but that's another story xD
Key is so stubborn! Junghwa's right...
Key needs to focus on the positives in life. The thing is, atleast he has Jonghyun in his life. Even if Jonghyun isn't necessarily his. Atleast he's there.
Dae is a bish, we all know.
But I'm torn.
You either let your love be happy. If you love him then let his happiness come before you.
But then people say that you shouldn't give up and instead try to get him to like you.
You can't force live right?
I know a lot of people believe Jungwha is going to turn out to be a love interest for Key, but I honestly don't see it...I think Jungwha is just the character who's going to become a light for Key in his obvious darkness. Jungwha will open Key's eyes to what he never wanted to see, making it easier for him to make the decision to go home to Jonghyun. (: there's potential the two boys could become real friends, but with Key upset over his inability to properly confess and with Jungwha mourning over his tragic love loss, I have high doubts that the two would become lovers.
I wonder what happens to the four?
I'm sure as hell that they are worried.When will Key come back? This time with clear thoughts about him and Jonghyun...and Junghwa.
@cantresistTAEMtation - Omg if you could see my face right now... xDD *Spazzspazzspazz* Tell your friend I love them and I'm flattered anyone would bother recommending my fic xD
@vampireme12 - Actually before this story finishes there'll have to be a sequel (I seem to be unable to plan just single fics >.< xD) so... Tbh, I like Junghwa, so I plan to keep him around xDD <3
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