Comments:   ✈ HALLUX CREW : ONE LAST MISSION! + on hold.

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uisofts
#1
sooooooooo... what is ur stance on applying twice? ^___^ juz curious
rosymoon
#2
gIVE ME SOME INFO THAT WILL INSPIRE ME, ALICE
i really want to apply, but?? ;;
okinawa
#3
i want to apply but my b rain wnot function
shibutani
#4
i would like ur love chennie ^_______^
littlemisstrouble
#5
Chapter 2: !!!!
i only read the review now omg

in response to the bullet points:
- should i change the "scarily smart" trait? her backup trait there is careless cause jiayi is a mess
- to clarify, she's good at retaining information and is good at understanding concepts even when she doesn't study it really hard unlike all us non-smart ppl who needs to study things really hard to understand sht
- also i love the idea of her begrudgingly going online at a later time to look at the ppt slides. that's exactly the type of thing she'd do
- lmao yep got really luck cause i have zero idea of what a bio major's sched is except that it's probably very busy?
- lol forgot to add that jiayi doesn't really care abt her class standing, and she's the type to not care about attendance so she'll probably disappear from school to make way for the project every once and a while
- her contribution can be being the rich one who just takes care of the expenses so the others don't have to. also she knows some things on a scientific standpoint so she's useful in those kinds of situation. and she has her own car so she could be the driver lmao
- yep, she joined hallux during her freshman year

(i'll probably add these to my app later but i'm on my phone rn rip)
[also heads up: the one in the pic there is bona instead of mei qi]
Miyurin
#6
Sorry it took me so long to fix the app, but i did it! >< i kinda change most of her personality since i got another idea for what i want this character to be like~
milkia
#7
Chapter 2: someboDY TEACH ME HOW TO CODE
mochiji
#8
Chapter 2: i knew i should've proof-read ,, I'm sorry i was rushing T.T
but i added in what i was missing in my app (mostly in the trivia section!) !! and theres a note in the end ...
anyways ,, sorry for the mistakes ! i think (i hope LOL) i fixed them all !1
Randomfan101
#9
omg i just found this... and lemme just casually add another app to my growing list lAUGHS
kanqwu
#10
@feed
ill get u .. a queer boi .. how about that
(srsly im planning for this app i just want to give u guys Quality ok)
czernys
#11
@feed give me insp
_haekyung
#12
Chapter 2: where's everyone gettin that ig layout wha ,,, whaa ,, iwantit
rosymoon
#13
@ feed
CHEN WHYYY
NOW I FEEL LIKE I HAVE TO APPLY
BUT I DIDN'T WANT TO
U SO MEAN
uisofts
#14
Chapter 2: thanks for the review chen!!!!! i'm glad u like blake she's my edgy child
AND LMAO she doesn't really play enough for any hero to be her main lbr and like should u actually main sym,,,
she just plays for the s and gigs and always picks the girls lmfao that's her tactic. girls
ALSO YES HAHFJGFD I ACTUALLY CAME UP W THE RYAN THING ON A WHIM I THINK IT SUITS HER see her with her ryan phone case...
ryan pins on her tote bag.........
also glad u like the songs!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
yakults
#15
Chapter 2: i made the list of fanfic for a friend IM LAU GHING
thanks for liking parker ^____^
i played overwatch like twice..... but i am constantly bombarded by it on twitter as well
so i kno a thing or two abt all of dat
rosymoon
#16
Throws shades @ alice
When did u stop wanting emancipation
kanqwu
#17
@feed those were my thoughts too
but it's ok :') it's whatever :'))))
shibutani
#18
Chapter 2: @feed hey alice i hate u pls get ur life together also stop leaving me on read on kkt UR A (u too chen)
chigusa
#19
Chapter 2: love you 2
legato
#20
Chapter 2: hola i made edits to my app, added language proficiency (underlined in the app) + rewrote relationship w/ seth nd sge

the little saigon i know (in east san diego at least) is pretty rundown tho everyone just keeps it on the downlow lol but if u want me to change tht i can + her parents speak cantonese to her bc a) they don't know eng and b) they didn't bother to teach her viet