Chapter 1: Very nicely written! I really liked how you structured it, manipulating our minds to think of a typical breakup scene with your prologue but actually delivering a twist that was so fresh. The way you implemented the dreams of Chanyeol chasing Baekhyun as a foreshadowing of his death was neat and after reading the last part of your story, everything just comes to light (a little something out of the box is always nice :)). Even though it's a sad story, the fact that this symbolizes how some people don't realize what they've lost until they lost them reflects bittersweet reality that draws people in (along with their favorite shipping of course :D). Can't wait to read more of your writing and good job!
I loved this when posted during the fest and even more now that I've reread it. Thanks for writing such a beautiful piece of art, it was lovely (and heartbreaking too)
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