I'm really nervous now but I'm itching for some type of release and I think a Hunhan tragedy fic /there's mpreg/ made by exo_otp is the perfect candidate. I remember bawling my eyes out in Red Ribbons but that was angst and this is tragedy so I'm gonna hydrate myself first before embarking this potentially floody journey.
Chapter 27: From start to the end, Sehun were always sweet n caring husband to Luhan. Too bad Sehun can't watch their second child to be born & this is definitely painful yet beautiful story of HunHan I've ever read. Thanks author-nim for always writes a beautiful story for us. Hope more HunHan & other couples fics come out from your amazing head & hands. I give perfect score for this fic. Really ❤
Chapter 26: Oh ghad this gotta be the most angsty fic who got all my emotions. It was all fluffy but knowing that his time is numbered made every tear thatI have flow. I love how loving sehun is here unlike other arrnged marriage fics. The angst tho I cannot because I know the feeling of having a good life but then your father suddenly left because of health :(
Chapter 26: Grreat story and author:-) haizt...pangalawa ko ng basa nito pero naiiyak parin ako...
..tnx authornim.....
...sana may special chapter dun sa mga anak nila zhiyu ang haowen.....
Chapter 27: I like your stories, you know I really liked this fic.. But something happened.. and bec of that im having a hard time imagining mpreg.. I wish i can undo things, its sad coz most fics im subscribed to is mpreg, gadhhh i dont know wjat to do
Chapter 26: Hi author! I just inished reading this story and tho a bit late, I wanna leave a comment here. The story in general is really awesome and interesting. The way Sehun sees life amuses me and I admire Luhan for not leaving Sehun and for being strong despite the latter's illness. I clearly felt the emotions you want to convey: happiness, sadness, grief, sorrow, etc. It was a great read however, there are some things I want to point out. Please don't be offended, it was never my intention. What I'm saying is that, your use of words, grammar and use of punctuations are kinda lacking. I know not all of us can speak fluent english, like me, i'm not a native speaker for I came in a different country. Your story is really awesome, it has a lot of potential and if written correctly and carefully, Cherish You might be antero or 10080 version of hunhan. If you want, you can get a beta to edit your work. Please don't be offended, i'm only here to give an objective criticism not to belittle your ability as a writer. I've read most of you story and I honestly love all of them. Goodluck author! Thank you so much for this story.
Chapter 26: i cried so much, i even had to watch some videos of sehun to actually think he was still living, after i confirmed that, i cried some more and this is really a touching story. i am also still crying. great story
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