oooooh poor teukies :( will he be fine ? >< i realllllyy like it *lol i sound really creepy right now :P* *urgh i mean verrrryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy much creepy...oh well your fault that your story is good :P* update soon neh ?^^

Wauw kind of a lucky girl.. xD I kind of feel sorry for them xD KEEP WRITING! :D

Your is good. I like it. From the way you write, i can tell that you're very creative. Your story is different from others. I love it n keep wanting for more ^_^

ow...<br />
your is already good <br />
hope you can update soon<br />
^^

Your pretty good, just remember to paragraph a little more, when your writing the some of the paragraphs got way to long and it became a little more difficult to the eye to read. Otherwise keep it up! ^ ^

what are you talking about?!? you don't at writing that was really hot!! lol ...hope the next couple its Kyumin;)<br />
update soon

Omg I feel so guilty for reading this but I couldn't make myself stop!! You should have WonKyu as a couple. Everyone knows how much Siwon loves and can't keep his hands of Kyuhyun :D Awesome job can't wait for the next chapter!

Oh my god this girl is creepy. And this scene is so hot, so don't worry! I really wonder what's with the gun shot though... I hope it's not the girl!!

What are you talking about not being great at writing ???!!! That was a really hot scene between EunHae, even though it was forced by a crazy fangirl, not complaining though. OH and if you want to read more fics to "improve" your writing, although I personally think you don't need to, Madame Hee Hee's House of Desires by LadyVamp is a definite read (http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/67037/madame-hee-hee-s-house-of-desires-zhoury-kyumin-sichul-hanchul-eunhae-yewook-eunhae-heechul-henrylau-kyumin-superjunior-zhoumi-zhoury/18). Hope you had a good Christmas! :D

Why the gunshot? Im getting freaked out by this girl...i know i shudnt be saying this but still she is damn luckey to be seeing thenin action

Kyuminnn

Haehyuk!!!!! Pleeeeez!!!!!

ZHOURY ZHOURY ZHOURY! Thanks

Just saying you told me to read them and dangg! seem interestting!!

hanchul hanchul hanchuuul pleaaaaaase *puppy eyes*

I want kyumin first

Your dignity, Heechul?? You go around kissing all of your band members, even innocent Henry had to suffer, so what are you talking about protecting your dignity? LOL... OOOh HanChul please!!!