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taglialatela
#1
Chapter 2: I HaTe U SO MUCH. IM CRYIJV WATERFALLS AT 1:41AM AND YOURE RESPONSIBLE FOR IT. WHY CANT MY PARENTS BAEKYEOL BE HAPPY. WHYD U MAKE CHANYEOL DIE. WHY DIDNT U KIL BAEKHYUN TOO SO THAT THEY CAM BE 2GRHTHER IN HE AFERLIFE. I HATE U I CANT EVEM COHERENT
miriki210 #2
Chapter 2: I hate you, dear author, for making me cry that much. I'm writing in tears now i can barely see what im typing i hate u i hate u i haye u
Panda-Chu
#3
Chapter 2: AH, my heart, my heart. I slightly expected this, but ahhhhhhhhh...

Very well written - you're quite adept at your choice of vocabulary and the way you phrase situations. I quite liked it. ^^
MissBlue1015 #4
Chapter 2: Love love it :)
sikami #5
Chapter 2: THAT WAS SO UNEXPECTED AND MY HEART IS SHATTERING INTO PIECES AND THIS IS GOOD STUFF RIGHT HERE AND OW MAH HEART IS CRYING
AchiFigDre
#6
Chapter 2: It's 2 am in thw morning and I am crying... I told myself that I want some angst before I sleep and now I'm regretting it. My eyes are so red. I have also snotted at some point between crying and sobbing while reading this masterpiece... That plot twist killed me... I was angry at Chanyeol but then when I read his pov I cried my eyes out.. That man is selfless .. His love for Baekhyun is so pure. I hate you authornim.. Wipe my tears away.... TT;; TT
SerenadeAi #7
Chapter 2: Oh my God. It's so beautiful
MsParadox
#8
Im crying!!!
junmenpapi #9
Chapter 2: I AM CRYING WTF STOP IT HURTS OHDMYFH
Chanyeol_life #10
Chapter 2: Ahh...wow. Yesterday when I read this and sobbed my eyes out/ cried myself to sleep, I forgot to comment but... This is beautiful yet so sad. Why do I even read angst if it will make me freaking bawl xD! I think Chanyeol did a bad Decision yet it was all for baek...gosh. Well thanks author-nim, *sigh* this was a 10/10 angst //sobs//
FlorineFly #11
Chapter 2: Hum... it's just so... so.... BEAUTIFUL !!!
You know I'm crying rivers now ! I just can't it's so sad but beautiful at the same time ! TTTTTT_TTTTTT
And at the end the kid's name is CHANHYUN ! TTTTT_TTTTT (it's lovely and cute ^w^ !)
And love you for writting this !
Rb2012 #12
Sad story . Cried at the ending
abexun #13
Chapter 2: THE FUDGINIG KIDS NAME IS CHANHYUN IM NOT OKAYH
Half way in the second chapter i was asking my self "do i want to read this?" im happy and crushed because i stayed and continued and im not ok
Why do people write thing like this aND WHY ARE THEY ALWAYS GOOD GDI T^T
Vip83bb
#14
Chapter 2: Why do I torture myself with angst? It lets me know I am alive. Sitting here, tearing up while eating Cheeto Puffs.
parkyouare #15
Chapter 2: why Im crying so hard now?!!! Its a beautiful story. Good job authornim.
ryannpeterson #16
Chapter 2: I am crying so hard OMG! My hand was covered in tears (and snot/tmi) and I was sobbing silently because it late, but very hard. I love chanbaek, they are my top ship in kpop so evry time I read a story where one dies I can't help but ball my eyes out! Amazon talent you have with writing! I hope you continue you other stories, particularly the crisis hotline one because I want to cry myself to sleep some more!
viettsbrry
#17
Chapter 2: I cried for this. AGAIN. I CANT BELIEVE THIS
KtjnRwby
#18
Chapter 2: Oh god I can barely write this comment with all the tears in my eyes. my heart is breaking. You write so beautifully.
springjasmine91
#19
Chapter 2: Babo Park ing Chanyeol..ah can't stop crying...in the bus otw home. Wonderful. Well done