Chapter 26: Okay I love the way you write the , is realistic, like the last part when she went to the bathroom after. I Don't know I just appreciate not overdo to the point when everything it's rainbows ha by the way I need a Chen pleaseee. And her eyes turned blue? They are soulmates right?
Chapter 26: Well if she’s his mate maybe she could get pregnant because her eyes turned blue? Maybe the artificial thing didn’t work because the owners weren’t mated? Also with the whole wolves mate for life logic? (Is it?)
Chapter 26: That was the most poetic and romantic scene I've ever read, like that was beautiful (and I really love the thing with her scars and seeing her smile at them for once instead of cover them or cringe at them <3). Moving past that, for the second Jordan thought back to having that talk with her friends, it made the situation seem like she was begrudgingly talking to her older brothers instead of experiment supervisors, which I feel like the scientists may kinda feel towards Jordan and Chen after watching them and rooting for them during this experiment. So that was an interesting thought for me hahah. I'm also interested in finding out what the eye colour change means and how it will come up next. The detail of Jordan asking about artificial insemination experiment participants being compensated was a great touch to demonstrate that side of her personality. The reasoning behind her adamant nature is awful, but it's natural that not all influences on one's character are positive and I don't think many positive things have happened in Jordan's life.
Chapter 26: Thank you for the update! I'm excited everytime I got notification from this story. Gonna wait patiently to know what will happen bext chapter.
Erm, I have a question. Do you need to pee after the act?
Chapter 26: What?! Her eyes turned blue?! ...like his!!! Mated pair bond?! I hope so.
Maybe the artificial insemination didn't work because the environment wasn't the right kind? Like the cells just ...know it's not the right type. Hence no successful trials.
Lol I'm taking an anatomy and a health class this semester while last semester was a biology course. Soooooo much info about cells.
Chapter 25: I love this story so much. The flow and pace are so nice, I really like it. I also ADORE your sense of humour. I almost chocked on my food multiple times while reading your story! Hahahha
Chapter 21: I cant help but comment about Jordan.. I promised to comment after i get to read the last chapter.. but DANGGG!!! she reminds me of Skye from agents of shield... Her character is so strong but so valid for fluff OMMOO!!!!
Chapter 24: I myself as an author never want to rush anyone for updates but I am so on edge I’m refusing to even go past chapter 24 because that means I have to be patient and wait for you to update lol. I’m so glad this story got featured otherwise I wouldn’t have found this masterpiece!!
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