Chapter 1: Hahaha this was so cute for some reason the smile seungho's had in his face... I could see him doing it hahaha
And I can't believe it... you called byunghee bunny ... I call him bunny . Not a lot of people do that hahaha... one because I saw him wearing a bunny suit in the healthy and in healthy living and well... his name sounds like bunny to be... byunghee bunny it sound the same. Hahahaha
Well the Grammer was something that needs to be worked in but other than that it was okay so don't worry about it.
Chapter 1: CUTE AND FLUFFY ARGH!!!! So adorable...
i understood some grammar mistakes but it's okay^^
thanks for making this and keep writing stories...
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