scars aflame

Description

really don't know what this is tbqh

listened to this while writing (literally, on repeat the whole time)

796 words

kaisoo

pg[-13]

 

 

 

 

*if you have any questions about the story (if you can call it that) just ask me since it probably won't make much sense

Foreword

 

don’t hesitate any more
just take my heart please.
yes, it is good as it is sharp
even the moon closed its eyes this night
if i were a different man
and if i had a passage in comedy
i would set fire to all the changed wounds that you and he made
baby don’t cry tonight
after the darkness has lifted
baby don’t cry tonight
it'll be like nothing ever happened
you won’t end up turning to foam
in the end you don't have to know
so baby don’t cry cry
I will guard you with my love
 
 
 
exo-k ; baby don't cry

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vainilla
#1
Chapter 1: best word vomit ever

i am falling in love of you
KaylaELFluv
#2
Chapter 1: This was beautiful... Sometimes I have thoughts like that when I think about how amazing JYJ and D.O and Lay are to me and you just have to question sometimes if a person can truly be so awe provoking... or if their even real...

I fear that one day I'll wake up and realize the past 7 years never happened... (orz excuse my rambling ><)

The point is that I loved this... -bookmarks it and and all that jazz-
boojae
#3
Chapter 1: holy ____ your word vomit is gorgeous. ;___;

jongin feels are the best kind. keep writing ngl i really like your style of writing.
XmaknaeluverX
#4
Chapter 1: wow ok as expected, your word vomits are beautiful and gives me weird nostalgic feelings.
maybe of missing home, someone, or something that doesn't belong to me or simply is invisible of existence.
i really love the first part, with the whole idea of getting under someone's skin, and maybe crawling up their spine, counting their ribs on the way. leaving bits and pieces of yourself in their blood system so they could maybe feel you nibbling on every cells of their body.
and yeah, maybe some people just aren't real.

BUT OMG YOUR JONGIN FEELS
PUT THEM
ON
THIS
WEBSITE
/scREamS
XmaknaeluverX
#5
oh im fast hehehehe