i've read your reply to them but in my opinion it's better to go by order - as in first explaining bobby's feelings before showing how much he wants to kiss him
Chapter 4: i think it's going a little bit too fast...?
i mean, bobby just noticed hanbin, there was no description of his deeper thoughts about hanbin and then suddenly he wants to kiss him already in chapter 4... it feels completely out of blue: what happened? how does he feel about hanbin? what's going on? why does he want to kiss him just like that?
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