Chapter 4: The story was good, the plot has sequence, it is short, but refreshing, it's just that it's like it was only the plot summary for me, and it's lucky that you have dreamed of GOT7 because it is really hard for my subconcious to do that (and I wonder why :3), but you could've made this much more wide if you add some touches of, like conversation, or like what the other characters think
anyways, it is a great story, and I'm still envious you dreamed of them :3 I never experienced that :3
and if you found my comment offensive, just take it off, I'll understand it, I can really be a critic sometimes ^_^
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