The First Feeling

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               She nodded and munched on her food faster. I looked at her. She finished eating and we headed to the car and drove off.

 

Hee Young’s POV

 

                We were driving along the high way. It was after noon already. I was really happy today but it seems to turn out to be the opposite of how it looked earlier. I smiled…

 

               “How was your confession?” Hyuk Eun suddenly blurted out.

                “What?” I turned to him, face aghast.

                “How was it with Yoon Seuk-ssi?”

                “Well… It didn’t turn out well…”

                “Really? Why?”

                “He likes someone else, and we don’t have time to talk really. I think he is busy with school stuff, so am I…”

                “Is that so?”

                “Yeah. Why did you ask?”

                “Do you miss him? I mean…”

                “Well… of course! He is my crush you know? Haha…”

 

                I answered jokingly. He stayed silent afterwards. It felt awkward. We arrived at the beach.

 

                “Yah! Oppa? The beach? Why here?”

                “It’s the perfect place to rest don’t you think? The view is good and we could watch the sunset together…”

                “But I didn’t bring my swim wear!”

 

                I tried to make the scene happier, but my joke failed. He ruffled my hair and hugged me.

 

                “You seem to be different today oppa…”

                “I am still as cute as ever my dear…”

 

                He smiled his warm smile, just like before. How I missed that smile so much!

 

                “Your things and your swim suit are in the bag. Go and change. I’ll meet you at the beach. Here is the key to your room, ok?”

 

                He handed me the key.

 

                “Ok… But, how about you? You’re not going to change into proper

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AppleJaJing
#1
-.- good job on making me cry lol
lilzen0820
#2
I really love this.. You make me cry! I even shared this to my best friends. they punch me for making them cry.. haha.. :D
SarangHaruPrei
#3
I know. Haha. I also cried while writing this.
SatsukiMizuki
#4
WAAAAH~! I hate you for making me cry! Anyway, good story. Chapters 11 and 12 were short but full of emotions, I hope I could write something as touching as yours. ;D
SarangHaruPrei
#5
Arasso [Alright]! Hehe. I'll publish it soon. I'll just finish this freaking story. Haha. :> I like the flow of your story. Crazingly addicting. Heeee. :))
SatsukiMizuki
#6
How about the one you made me read? the one with the girls generation being a mafia group? That was an interesting one. Wasn't that your first? Publish it, I bet many would read it since there is super junior in it! ^_^
SarangHaruPrei
#7
Hehe. This is my first story. I know it's kind of messed up but I'll try to do it more better on the next one. Thanks for reading by the way! :)
keep-the-faith
#8
Hee hee... This is so sweet!
SatsukiMizuki
#9
Wahaha! XD cheesy dude cheesy parang queso de bola! XD
SatsukiMizuki
#10
Bwahahahahaha! If the guy just has guts to say it then everything would have been fine XDD<br />
He should have more confidence since he is more like the "perfect guy" character!