Chapter 1: Oh I love how he refers to himself as "your Youngjae", lovely touch for an already emotional moment.
Couple of grammatical errors, ie. at the end should be "so does Youngjae". Nothing too major, they don't really detract from the writing, but they're there.
Very cute pairing, nicely characterized! I will say that I doubt Youngjae would be so smooth though, I've always thought of him as a little bit awkward :D
Chapter 1: Omg, I lost count of what I exactly ship in Got7... I'd say... I ship this!!! 8D Aww, it was really cute and ugh.. I can somewhat perfectly imagining Youngjae being that hyung who takes care of someone who's younger than him, in that case Bambam. ;3;
Chapter 1: Oh, it was really pretty and sad at the same time really sad... I'm sure one day Bambam will understand that he loves Youngjae and they will live happy è-é! (yes I know it's just a fanfic x)...)
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