Help me, Duizhang!

Description

EXO-M's Maknae, Tao is in danger now! Black Haters, an organization that have been aiming for kidnap Tao success to kidnapped Tao! They contact EXO members and inform them to play with them first. If EXO lose in that game, than Tao will die. So, will EXO wins the game or even lose and lost in that game?

Foreword

Hello ^_^ I'm new author here ^^ Hehehee ^_^ I'm 14 years old and this is the first Fanfic that I wrote in English >_< I usually write Imagine.. Not fanfics in english.. But I have tried my best so please enjoy ^_^ Don't forget to feedback me ^_^ No haters! Haters gonna Hate! And sorry for the typo(s) >_< Enjoy the fanfic!

 

Regards,

Author Little Pink Girl

No plagiarism!!! This is my own idea!

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sofie93 #1
Hi! I'm here with some feedback :) The plot and story are good so far. It was a great first try to write in english but there were quite a few grammar and spelling mistakes. Try to read the text a few times to find faults that you might have missed before posting. (I do that all the time and I find something new almost everytime) :) I thinks its great that you write stories at such a young age in another language! Keep at it! Practice makes perfect! :) have a nice day!
cutiexx123 #2
can you promote my fanfic in your next chappie please ?? :) i'll appericiate it alot! thx ^^
Muslimah_Aisyah #3
Chapter 1: Im also TaoRis shipper .. Poor Tao oppa ..
jillianwwykpoplover #4
Hey :)
Just asking if Hyuk Jae is the kidnapper?? And is it a TaoRis fanfic?(I m a TaoRis shipper~)
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