When Love Walks In

Description

Well, this is my first fanfic and I might be no-good (because English is not my first language, and I'm still learning) but, there was a lot of ideas in my head and I decided to do it.

Please, tell me if there is anything wrong ok?!

Foreword

" I didn't know what my feelings were like.

just look at him was painful, we are both man, we are teammates, we were friends.

I wish I could stop, but I can't, now is too late to regret.

I want to eat all my way through his heart, and I will! "

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LoneShiba #1
Chapter 18: happy ending please? ^^
Zimmy02 #2
Chapter 18: aaaww forget and forgive :)
Michi-Dae
#3
Chapter 17: Updated finally. ;d
onewtop #4
Chapter 5: I love it but wae is my top my innocent top like that
sayasayangtodae #5
Chapter 16: i m a bit confused.but please update soon and longer plisss... <3<3
LoneShiba #6
Chapter 13: :o

don't you dare to kill my hubby T____________________________T

oh gosh T_T
Michi-Dae
#7
I promise the end won't be sad. Don't you guys worry, we have a long way to go yet. :]
xtavista #8
Chapter 13: tell me this is just another dream right??don't kill my dae..
daebabysung #9
Chapter 13: why??why??why my baby Dae deserves this??WHY?!
Gd, why don't you solve this early, why?
TOT, my todae arg...
Zimmy02 #10
Chapter 12: OMG!! noooo my taedae!! TAT
omo.. whyyy??? :'(