Embracing Vulnerability

Bae Joohyun's Green Flag Love
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The rain pitter-pattered against the windowpane, creating a soothing backdrop to the intimate conversation taking place between Seungwan and Joohyun. They sat on the plush couch, their bodies angled towards each other, embracing the vulnerability that comes with sharing one's deepest fears and insecurities.

 

Seungwan took a deep breath, her voice quivering slightly as she spoke. "Joohyun, there's something I need to tell you. I've been carrying this fear for a while, and I want you to know about it."

 

Joohyun reached out and gently grasped Seungwan's hand, her touch offering solace and understanding. "You can tell me anything, Seungwan. I'm here to listen and support you."

 

Seungwan's eyes met Joohyun's, her vulnerability laid bare. "In my past relationships, I've been hurt and betrayed. It's made me cautious, afraid to fully trust. But with you, it's different. I want to let go of those fears and open my heart completely, but sometimes, I still feel that lingering doubt."

 

Joohyun's expression softened, and she squeezed Seungwan's hand, her eyes filled with empathy. "Seungwan, I understand that healing takes time. I want you to know that I'm here for you, ready to hold your hand and walk with you through the process. Trust is something that we can build toge

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Riscark #1
Chapter 8: Bruh that first line, before the comma, almost got me, I thought it was gonna turned into angst
Riscark #2
Chapter 3: Communication is the key, in the relationship it's easy to get lost in your insecurity or your past memory, but if you can communicate with your person, it won't be hurdle anymore
Cyrell #3
Chapter 4: I wish I can have their relationship. You make me envy with the story. Good writing. It gives me positivy as well. Your story is something to look forward to.
Riscark #4
Chapter 2: The perfect morning doesn't exi-
*BAMMM this chapter exist
Riscark #5
Chapter 1: For a sec I thought it was gonna end with angst 😅As usual tho, you manage to wrote beautiful story authornim
Nat25nat #6
It's weird, it's stated that the word count 5475 words however after I open the first chapter it's only 633 words
shadowhunter1640 #7
Chapter 1: Foreword made me anticipate the journey of Joohyun as was said. And the 1st paragraph piqued my interest. But i was kind of disappointed with how the story flowed. It was too quick and didn't feel like a journey at all. Quite unrealistic since it's unlikely that someone would take a chance with a stranger though a one night stand would be possible. And their spoken words were too cringey to say the least.

I've contemplated leaving these negative comments here because i thought the author would feel bad. But i've decided to push it instead for i believe it will help develop your writing. Too good comments may make you feel good but i believe negative ones can push you through greatness. So author please don't feel offended by what i've written.

On the note of the positives, i've liked your adjectives and how you constructed your sentences. Please continue writing and thank you for sharing your work with us. Fighting!
rizkybae
#8
Chapter 1: Padahal cerita nya bagus tapi terlalu pendek
rizkybae
#9
Izin baca
Joanajade
#10
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