If only I listen.... (One shot love story)

Description

This story was based on... well, because of my sad mood, I wanted a story that ended sad. 

 

Made By : PIPIHB.

on : Dec 8

updated : Dec 9

I made this due to my emotional feeling, so this prove that I made this myself. I do not steal your story and if it's the same with your story, I believe that is just coincidence. I'M NOT IN THE MOOD TO STEAL PEOPLE'S STORY. and I'm not a stealer. I know that's wrong and I, as an ELF, do not do things that an ELF won't be doing. kthanks. 

 

characters :

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Ahn So Hee.

Sister to Ahn Sun ye, cousin to Son Dong Woon.

used to be dorky? lol.

 

Jang Hyun Seung.

A sweet guy who never wants to move on after one misunderstanding happened between him and his ex.

Made a mistake that he may regret in his whole life. 

 

Yong Jun Hyung.

Helped So hee throughout the years. 

 

  • Sorry If the story :D
  • Sorry for making it too long, here I am again to edit every part out to explain everything precisely! ^^
  • Nice comments will be appreciated rather than just reading it.
  • I can take critics too :) 
  • I'm an ELF, not a beauty but I love beast too. :)
  • I made a sequel called "Now, I promise to listen". Please check check check it out~! ^^

Foreword

 

yesterday night, she asked me to listen but I refused and call her names instead...

yesterday night, I let out my anger on her... over things that didn't even happened...

yesterday night, If only I listen to her... she would still be alive...

I collapsed on the floor, and Jun hyung's word came back through my mind...

 

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saludlang #1
i enjoy reading1
TamirTenei
#2
Chapter 1: sad but good story line... nice~
fiezah95 #3
this is the most sad stories i've ever read!!!!!ugh!!!<-sad action....
fiezah95 #4
this is the most sad stories i've ever read!!!!!ugh!!!<-sad action....
KLaneF
#5
Nooooo Soheeeee </3 D;
midorix3
#6
OHMYGHOSH!!! :O<br />
OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG<br />
NO WONDER SUN YE WAS ALL BUBBLY WHEN SHE SAID THAT!!!<br />
AGHHH!!! I can't believe a sister would do that to a sister... although they ain't sisters...but whatever.<br />
That's a good one-shot. It's sad but really good! GOOD JOB!!!
entity
#7
IS IT JUST ME OR DOES THE FIRST HALF OF THE STORY SOUND A LITTLE LIKE BIG BANG'S HARU HARU MV? :/<br />
Anyways, GREAAAAAT JOB. There aren't many fanfics with Hyunseung AND Junhyung, so this will be one of MAH TREASURES~ XD<br />
LOL. But no, really, this was good. And I get what you mean about the emo moods, I had one myself one day and ended up writing a Hyunseung, OC and Junhyung one-shot to post here too ^^<br />
I could cry after reading this, I really could. You've got amazing potential for writing!!~ ^^<br />
HWAITING!! Good work!! Keep on writing, yeah?
hyeamazing #8
Aww, Sunye's a hhh. >.< Junhyung apologized when he did wrong. Sunye didn't. Sigh. Poor Sohee. Aishh, Hyunseung's a jerk. -.-
pipihb #9
@Siliyis yes yes. haha. I was in bad mood so I decided to make the story ended saad. thank you, first commenter! love u~ lol. :DDDDD *flying