Y/N

Just avoid all the business with Y/N. Period.

It's like reading a story with all these deep characters and detail that you can actually visualize it in your brain

and suddenly

the Y/N appears.

It completely ruins the story and since it is dedicated to the reader, most of the time there isn't much character development so it just feels really empty. Give the main character name and a interesting personality so the reader will be more interested.

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meowzwrites ^{14 streak} #1 Mar 8, 2019 04:20:44

Chapter 3: Lolololol

meowzwrites ^{14 streak} #2 Mar 8, 2019 04:20:22

Chapter 2: This!!! I mean it’s okay if you want to write your oc like this but you can make them be a tomboy with a harsh personality or you can make them a girly girl with a soft personality. I’ve seen too much of “their appearance / behaviour around others contradicts their personality”