Almost paradise/ a Sequel to “A Picnic in Paradise” and “A sight of Paradise”

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This story is a Sequel to “A Picnic in Paradise” and “A sight of Paradise”

✧✦➳ comedy➳fluff


 

 

 ❀☼☆ Almost Paradise  ❀☼☆

 

 

 

 

Five years later, when Kyungsoo and Jongin were leaving their flat to work, a girl was standing before their door. Holding a bag and a message. “I’m going to my honeymoon, keep Seon safe.. Yoona.”

Kyungsoo looked at Jongin. 

Jongin looked at Kyungsoo. 

“She is your daughter!!” Kyungsoo whispered to his boyfriend.

“I guess!” He whispered, “Yoona didn’t let me see her for the last three years! She was in Taiwan you know!” He said with a low tone, then, he looked at the girl and smiled awkwardly. “H-hello!”

 “Which one is my father?” She asked.

“Me.” Jongin gulped.

“I remember you.” She smiled and peeked through the flat, “will I stay here! Or with my grandparents?”

“Yo—“ Jongin had been interrupted by Kyungsoo.

“Of course you will stay here with your father! You little pretty girl!” He caressed her hair.

She smiled.

Jongin blinked in surprise.

Kyungsoo hesitated before cheering up. “Great!” He looked at Jongin. “Umm, okay! I gotta go.”

“What? Wait! I have to go to work too!!” 

“She is your daughter,” Kyungsoo grinned, “see you.” He caressed the girl’s hair and walked out.

Jongin blinked in disbelief as he saw his boyfriend leaving him alone with the girl; his daughter.

He sighed and took his phone from his pocket, he called Yoona, but her phone was off. He looked at Seon and bent over. “When did your mother get married?”

She was holding a brown stuffed bear. “Two days ago.” She seemed scared of him.

He sighed again and held her shoulder. “Come on, you are welcome here.” He said with a worried smile.

She stood by the door and shook her head. “I don’t want to get in.”

“What? Why?”

“I don’t want to.” She stomped her feet on the ground.

“But—“

“I’ve changed my mind, I want to go to mom.”

“Your mother isn’t here!” Said Jongin.

“I want my mom.” She pouted.

“Ah, okay! We will call her, just come in.” He opened the door. 

“No.” She insisted.

Jongin sighed and took his phone to call Kyungsoo.

Kyungsoo answered. “What?”

“Kyungsoo, she doesn’t want to enter the apartment!”

“Why?”’

He looked at her. then turned around. “She wants Yoona!”

“Try to convince her! Buy her some candy.”

“She—“ he looked back over his shoulder, “damn! She left!!”

“Jongin!!! Find her.”

Jongin whined. “Kyungsoo, come on, please,” he looked around, “I think she used the elevator!!”

“Jongin!!! Uhhh, okay! I’m coming.”

“Please. Hurry up, my Love.”

“Fine.” Kyungsoo exhaled.

Once he arrived, he saw Jongin sitting on the platform with her, she was crying. 

When Jongin saw Kyungsoo, his lips turned down. “Love, help me.”

Kyungsoo sighed and bent over, he patted her hair. “Why are you crying?”

“I want mommy.” She sobbed.

“She will be back soon, I promise.” He said.

“When?” She sniffled back her tears.

“A week I think, but guess what?”

She stopped crying.

“We will go to the wonderland, and buy sugar candy for you.”

She smiled. “Really?”

“Yes! We will go today.” Kyungsoo smiled, he glanced at Jongin and frowned. He asked her. “Do you want ice cream? Because I want to buy one for myself.”

She stood up. “Yes!”

Jongin pressed his lips and was about to follow them, but Kyungsoo stopped him. “You take her luggage to the apartment, we will be back.” Kyungsoo held her hand and left with her.

Jongin looked at them in disbelief, she was smiling happily and holding his boyfriend’s hand.

“What the heck!!” He sulked and went upstairs to their apartment, he dragged her back and closed the door. He went to the window and tried to locate them. He saw them crossing the street, she seemed happy! He pouted.

Once they had came back, Jongin was wearing his sweater and sweatpants. He asked with his hands in his pocket. “Where is my ice cream?”

“Oh! I didn’t buy one for you!” Said Kyungsoo.

Jongin sulked. He looked at her, there was some ice cream on the corner of , he said. “There is an ice cream on you mouth.”

Kyungsoo shook his head. “You should wipe it for her! Not telling her that!” He took a white napkin off his pocket and wiped ; gently. 

She grinned at him. “I wish you were my father.”

Jongin scolded her. “I’m your Father! Don’t say this!”

She looked at Kyungsoo and held his hand. “Take me to the wonderland.”

“Now!”

“Yesss.” She jumped, “yes, yes, now.”

Kyungsoo checked the time, he sighed and nodded. “Okay! Let’s go.”

“I don’t want to go.” Said Jongin.

“No one asked you to come along.” Kyungsoo giggled.

She laughed and embraced his thigh.

Jongin frowned. 

Kyungsoo put her on the couch. “Let me change my clothes, okay! I will be back.”

She nodded cheerfully.

Jongin followed him to their bedroom. “She isn’t polite!”

“She is a kid, Jongin.” Said Kyungsoo while changing his clothes. 

Jongin pouted. “When will you be back!”

“I don’t know!” He buttoned his shirt.

Jongin exhaled. He rolled his eyes. “I’ll go back to sleep.”

Kyungsoo fixed his hair. “Good idea!” He grinned and kissed Jongin’s cheek. “See you.”

 

 

 

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Kyungsoo came back at 4 o’clock, Jongin was extremely frustrated. The little girl was happy and her mo

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M0o0nlight
#1
Chapter 86: Magnificent 💕
kaisoolengzkie141214 #2
Chapter 86: you continuously amaze me💚💛❤️I really loved your works…
Wiwipantsy
#3
Chapter 86: I feel like I watched a movie😍Wow!!
Kaikaseee
#4
Chapter 86: Another wonderful story ❤️
ObsessedFanatic
#5
Chapter 85: Yay, I finally finished reading this story.
I kept stopping & starting & repeat.
I am happy I was able to wrap it up this morning.

I hate the fact Jongin was a total jerk to Kyungsoo to spite his father, because Jongin actually needed counseling and not to be mistreated further by his father, esp since he was still grieving his mother's death.

Kyungsoo didn't deserve to suffer from Jongin's misdirected anger at all, and truth be told, Jongin didn't deserve him either.

Okay, I didn’t care much for Jongin's father because of how he treated Jongin unfairly & terribly.
He kinda ruined the story for me.

Even at the end with Jongin's father improved behavior & acceptance of Kyungsoo & Jongin's union, it still wasn't enough for me to forgive Jongin's father.

I am glad Jongin's father finally came to his senses, though.

Thank goodness for the special individuals that supported Kyungsoo & Jongin throughout the story, because they needed a strong support system, esp when they were facing such issues.

Congratulations to the lovebirds [KaiSoo] who were able to resolve their issues, find a common ground, express their true feelings, & maintain a strong bond throughout their hardships.
I wish them a long healthy & happy life together.

❤️Author Sun-Gee, thank you for continuing to write various stories for your diverse readers, and I feel there's a story for everyone.

🙏🏼Have a great rest of the day & weekend.

P.S. Please don't ever delete my favorite stories, because I enjoy rereading them in between stories.
LovelyEonnie
#6
Chapter 86: I somehow thought that Kyungsoo is half Tyloon, half human with his eagerness to go to their land. But dear, after each time i read your wonderful stories, i always come up with a question. How does your mind work? Its incredible! The story, the plotline, characters, settings, the twists.. you are magnificently amazing dear. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. Love you dear!
Vidaniatas
#7
Chapter 86: Just wanna say you are my favorite author 💕
siemprekaisoo
#8
Chapter 86: Such a plot twist with Soo being not only half Tyloon but also the leader's son!!! That's one of the reasons I love your creations so much, my dear friend, each & every story is so wonderfully crafted to keep you very engaged & with so many surprises in store for the reader!!! Thank you for another wonderful story!!! ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Jinu86 #9
Chapter 86: Power of love kaisoo❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
Always amazing story dese, thank you dear ❤❤❤❤❤❤
anneber
#10
Chapter 86: This is so satisfying to read!!! The power of love can conquer ALL differences!!! I love the stories!!!