For those of you who are confused about the ending. Lisa left Jennie without saying goodbye because she had her reasons. It's up to your imaginations, really. But one thing was for sure, she didn't want to leave Jennie.
Chapter 1: hey, first of all, as a first time for a writer, IS NOT CRAPPY. i absolutely loved it. if this is your first, im kinda happy that i'll be seeing you grow as a writer, if you are going to write more, that is.
second, "she didn't want to leave jennie." ... are you perhaps going to write more? maybe on lisa's pov? and another part (3) when it has a happy ending? maybe? hahaha [ ive been reading too mucg angst lately, my heart aches too much ]
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