Whoosh, Whoosh

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Description

Two old friends remember, and think of what was, what could have been, and what will be.

Foreword

They didn't know each other very well, but over the course of a couple of years, they grew to be the closest of friends.

As their lives got busier and more complicated, they gradually parted ways. They gained new friends, their old relationship disappeared.

Sure, they saw each other from time to time and chatted politely, but the feelings they used to have were gone.

At least, until one chance meeting on a train changed everything.

 

"Hyoyeon?"

"Jinki?!"

 


I was influenced by the FlowerBoysGeneration episode with Key and Onew guest MC-ing and Hyoyeon, Sunny, and Jessica as guests. Hyo and Onew talked about their pre-debut days and how they would sometimes ride the train home together, which I thought was cute. teehee. 

I may or may not have also been inspired by the anime movie, 5 Centimeters Per Second (Byousoku 5 Cm). I watched the movie after I had started writing this fic, but the similarities in my idea and the movie astonished me. As I have continued to write, 5 Cm continues to influence my decision regarding the mood, imagery, and perhaps plot of the fic.

Review Credits:

Both review shops I had requested from have now been taken down, so I assume it's okay to take the reviews down too. But the reviews from nikkixobg and Multipersonality have been really great help!

 

EDIT: ON HIATUS. As soon as I get the time, edits will be made. The foreword will receive a drastic change, and I'm working on a poster, guys! And looking for a proper background, and making everything more relevant and connected. Chapters will have minor edits as well. I'm including a soundtrack, too! (Biting off the Byousoku 5 Cm CD eheh ^.^")

Edit 2: a reworked and remade version of this fic can be found here: Passing Trains

tillynilly
keep an eye out. i may (or may not) have a little present soon. keke. -WW

Comments

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QaaYeol #1
Chapter 10: I miss hyonew ..
ValenskyK
#2
Chapter 21: Update soon ^^ fighting ^^
Hyoyeonfans
#3
Chapter 21: I like your figure of speech. It makes the story better and sweet in my opinion :D keep writing! Fighting!!! Hehehe :))))) hyonew :3
QueenFlora
#4
Chapter 21: YAYAYAYAYAYAYAY^^
viechu #5
Chapter 21: Aaaaaaa finally! I have my hyonew agaiin! Thank you very much! ;D
QueenFlora
#6
Chapter 20: EH? Still no update?
HoshaTree
#7
Chapter 20: My long overdue comment lol:
I think that was a really lovely place to end! It actually brings it back to the beginning quite nicely.
As for theme... I really liked the way that the flashbacks at the beginning created a sense of 'innocence lost' and how they were put in contrast with the present day. Especially the part when they find that the old lady has passed away. It shows how things can never go back to exactly how they were.
I wasn't sure if you were going to throw some hyohyuk/onsica derail in there, but in the end I thought it was good :)
Ye_angel #8
Waaaa!!! THEY ARE DATING! D-A-T-I-N-G
OHH MY I THINK I WILL DIE TO HAPPINESS Kekekekek
5ShiNingStars #9
THEY'RE FINALLY DATING XDDDD
LIKE FINAAALLYYYYY <333

dont worry i'll wait for your story updates as always :)))
QueenFlora
#10
I love it hwaiting !!!!!