The girl staggered to the floor, in pain. She looked up and glared at her attackers, who began to back away, placing an object onto a box. They hadnt taken it from her, but stuck it in her arm. She gripped it as it started to throb painfuly.

ok, this story is from a game, Suikoden Tierkreis for the DS, and i generally looooooove it. anyone whose played the game knows that its a bit long and intense. Well, i, to improve my writing skills, plan on writing out the game, since its soooooo AWESOOOOME!!!!!!